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Fia Naturie
1 month ago

I felt one word “intense” Good piece
Damian DeadLove
1 month ago

Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fia Naturie
1 month ago

That last stanza
“And by the time it ends,
you realize:
you have traveled
farther inside yourself
than any map
could ever show.”
Par man that is gold
- PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
  1 month ago
  
  Thanks my dear. 🌻
Damian DeadLove
1 month ago

“And by the time it ends,
you realize:
you have traveled
farther inside yourself
than any map
could ever show.”

Brilliantly penned, PAR. Another excellent write (day) my friend. This one is definitely all about the miles traveled, journeys tend to do that it seems. Amazing read with precise imagery brother, I could picture the surroundings especially the highway. Nicely done as always. That last stanza was chef’s kiss. I concur with Fia. Appreciate you.

Damian
- PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
  1 month ago
  
  Thanks, my Brother!

redzone
1 month, 1 week ago

Not sure I want to go inside myself that far PAR. I just might go inside so far that I see my self outside looking in. That would be a paradox, and people would say I am insane, more so than usual. So, while I enjoyed reading your poem very muchly, I think I will just sleep this 27th day of poetry away. Wake me up at 12:O1 on the 28th. (It is a…Read More
- PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
  1 month, 1 week ago
  
  Clock is set, my friend.

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