I am shooting in different direction so I can hit the target. Haha

Thank you, Aidra! Appreciated. “)

There’s just no telling what you will find in my oven, baby, but I love it when you turn the knobs.

Imagery turned into a, Dali painting in my head. Tight spill, M.E. Appreciate you.

Damian

A kiss after tea… nice one

My kitchen has 2 items. One sharp and decadent. The other sweet and savory. Nice imagery ME;))

Hahaha! I am glad you have told me. NO DARTS FOR AIDRA. Hahaha

But wait! There is a dart in my heart! YOUR COMMENT..THUMP

Damian captured it well, this has the feel of a Dali painting in poetry form. I love that it’s not structured in thought…it just goes

Thank you, Willow! Highly appreciated! “)

I love the abstract vibe.

Hahaha!
Thank you, Indie! “)

I could relate to this poem. It’s not “stupid”. We all fall for “fictional” men and women.

I love the way you use repetition in this piece, and the rhyme is really nice. I like the message. Fictional men have no faults, so they are easy to fall for. It reminds me of an old song called Imaginary Lover by Atlanta Rhythm Section.

Brilliantly penned, my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Also,inspired off Alec Benjamin’s single, “”Water Fountain”.

Beautifully penned. Appreciate you.

Damian