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Read More"How long does she have?" asked the man behind the counter, stooping in his lab coat as he assessed the prescription."The doctor doesn't know. Perhaps a few weeks."The elderly gentleman empathetically smiled, his ocean blue eyes regarding his customer....
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Thank you, M.E.! I like to give you the unexpected…
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Highly imaginative, Lady
Full of suspense sexuality and devotion.
It’s been a while since I have read story telling this good
Reminds me of the old erotica short stories I used to
read when I was youngerGreat job DK
Naaj
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Thanks, Naaj! I’m so glad you liked it. I was looking for something sweet and suspenseful. I accidentally ran into that internal Hawaiian love story when I was studying the flower and incorporated into the piece. It’s legitimate Hawaiian folklore, and I thought it was pretty cool.
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Indie, thank you so much for reading and your specific recommendations. I’m sure you realize that the name, Charlie, was specifically chosen to surprise the reader in the way you mentioned – still, I like your idea to make it more obvious when the curtain finally rises on her identity. I’ll check on the parking lot as well.
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Thank you, HJ! I’m glad you liked it!
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Powerful work. Hot. Well crafted and steamy.
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Thank you, Thomas. I’m glad you liked it.
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Beautifully penned, DK. A steamy erotic write, with fabulous storytelling, and an incredible imagination my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re awesome, Damian! Thank you!
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Brilliantly written. Well executed. Sex, sex and more sex. This is some hot motherfucking shit!
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Well, hopefully more than just sex – but thank you! I’m definitely into sex!
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Never cease to impress. Always well written and deep (pun intended) lol. The story flows smoothly and hott hott hott 🔥 😋
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Thank you, Daniel. My goal is to impress you and, well… excite you.
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I keep missing the reply button!
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So are you, girl, and thank you! No apologies for tears, but kisses for cleanup!
xoxo
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You’re getting good at this😉
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I’m so glad you think so, Peter! Thank you!
xoxo
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A beautiful description of the transition to the afterlife. I’ve got chills, morbidly beautiful. I’ve enjoyed this, well done D.K xx
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I’m so glad you liked it, PG! Thank you!
xoxo
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The last stanza, I got the chills. Nice. Xoxo
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I love giving you chills!
xoxo
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Sheesh! This gave me Bram’s Dracula vibes! Excellent!
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I’m a huge fan of that movie, though I haven’t read the book. That’s on my bucket list.
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Yes! A Beautiful film and book. “)
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oh Peter… you haven’t seen anything yet… this woman is a witch…
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Noooooo!!! Peter! Peter! (pumpkin eater)… I’m a GOOD witch, Peter! I’m the GOOD witch of the North or maybe it’s the South. Shit! Which fucking direction? Come back here! Come back!
Dammit, Sam! I was ‘THIS’ close, and you ruined it. I should never have taken that apple out of your mouth until I was ready to sit on your face.
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The whole piece is fantastic 👏 and the last stanza is remarkable poetry! Bravo!
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Wow, thank you, Daniel. I love your comments. Truly, I do. Thanks for following me!
xoxoxo
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Dark. My bed sheets will be over my head tonight after reading this. Nice!
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Oh, stop it, Keith. Pull your sheet down. I want to get a look at your neck and… wait, what is this? A tent pole?
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a tent pole is raised at night and in the morning. Come see what lurks beneath my sheets!!
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That thing operates just like clockwork
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Oh stop, Mr. Dragon! Your poetry is amazing… publication worthy. You have incredible depth and vision. I always love you insight on my stuff! Thank you!
xoxo
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Damn girl, you’re good with metaphor. Love that last stanza, it’s killer..
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Wow, thank you so much, Pandy! I’m honored. Thanks for reading!
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You’re welcome. It was an enjoyable read!
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Read MoreI used to think that if I ask for nothing then am given nothing at least I was not hurt in the not-getting But oh, I was so wrong, you see for in the asking, you get something that can be everything
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Very good…lots going on here.
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If you do not ask you will not receive. To ask is nerve wracking and can make you anxious. But to receive without asking is another possibility.
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Powerfully penned, Silence. A write that makes me ponder, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My grandmother used to say ”a closed mouth don’t get fed”
Short n sexy vibe this is
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you all for the lovely comments, and many blessings to us all! <3 Echo
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I didn’t expect it to go that way! I am not into short stories but that was steamy and rejuvenating. Well done, DampKitten!