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Liziantus-Marantus posted in the group News and Suggestions
I just want to make a quick suggestion. Could we have an actual edit button on our poems and posts,instead of having to delete the whole thing?
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Read MoreLet me tell you a tale.Of a glowing sun far away that fell.When it's day,it shines brightly. And darkness doesn't want to fight me.The sun one day was up in the sky.She questioned,I feel weird,broken. But why?One day,the sun had met...
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Read MoreAugust Moon He hailed from Dartmoor, near the prison townWhile she was born to poor folk on the moorThey chanced upon love’s passion, so profoundAnd met just months before the start of war She knew he was the one, when...
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The way you open this up I feel I am reading the Mists of Avalone. I like this
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Thank you!
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Brilliantly penned, Reggie. An incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You are too kind.
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Read MoreShe was An exquisite mime A carved forgotten beauty Blindsided my dreamscape...she did Propped her...
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Love this stanza and the picture is beautiful.
“She’d string together days of future-past theories
Just for me…where we aged like fine wine
Where all of our what-ifs became that potent fifth
Of liquefied love”-
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I’m glad you dug that particular stanza, Fia.
It’s pretty much the center piece of the mood sing I was
in when I penned this vibe.Big thx for the support
Naaj
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Beautifully penned, Naaj. Wonderful imagery and a great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yeah, this one sits in a very special corner of my mind.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts always, DamianNaaj
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She’s occupied my mind for decades.
Very special indeed.Thx for dropping your thoughts hun
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Read MoreAscendingBeyondCozmicDimensionsEvery-time FREEquenciesGalvanizeHereInsideJah'sKindredLabeledMagneticNomadicOstracizedProphecyQuietlyReconciledSeeminglyTimidUnlessVexedWithXenophobesYellingZealotry
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Brilliantly penned, Naaj. Quite a feat you achieved that was a tough challenge my friend. Dig this. Much respect. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big thx for the compliment, Damian. Alway appreciative of your visits
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you hun. Always appreciate your energy.
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Dude! My attempt at A-Z was a full out failure. Had to go Z-A…contrary creature that I am. This rocks!
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” Had to go Z-A ” ha!! Luv that!
Thanks for the fantastic energy hun!!
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I like to look at this piece as metaphorical analogy – a description of friendship and how people glow off each other. As simple as you seem to make it, the piece exemplifies the complexity of relationships – how our energy feeds one another. I like it.