This is the best thing of yours that I ever read.
You should be congratulated.
Congratulations dear.

You are welcomed at least that much. 🙏🏼

“Jim is correct” I like the sound of that. But really, I appreciate that and the fact that you see the wonder of this poem tells me a lot about you too. 🙂 💚

😊 Thank you dear.

TY – too kind would imply harm of some kind, like killing you with it. I think you don’t mean that tho. I think you mean you like me. I like you as far as I can tell from here 😉

You mean out of my freakin’ mind hysterical or funny?

🙂
be well

The bees chasing the flowers over and over again. We are chasing something, but what is it?

You forgot a birthday. Well, it looks like you made up for it. lol

Sam, I hope you’ve learned your lesson! Maybe invest in a calendar? Lol, God forbid you forget an anniversary. 😉 Great read, just enough to get the blood pumping.

xx ~P.G💋

Hoi hoi
Love this one a lot. Really good write.
The corners of my mouth have a will of their own and keep on turning up.

Did you ever considerate writing a song to the accompaniment of slamming doors?
If you are not going to do it, I will.
Well, honestly someone’s got to do it huh?

I’ll be on the look out for your next.
Kind regards, Gus

That story sure illustrates a great way to show forgiveness.

im sorry… I hope that heightened sense of arousal didn’t get you in trouble. ill go hide somewhere so you dont find me

Cotton Candy is called Fairy Floss in Australia.
“She tastes like fairy floss”
Fact or fiction, you’re writing is always terrific and always grammatically correct.

🌻

Thanks. I think I need to find more meaning in my life. I post everyday and have put together 2 books that no one has read. It’s starting to seem pointless. I may take a break soon or just give up.

Hoi hoi
Love this one.

I went to a lezzie bar (one of the first in Amsterdam) with a lady friend of mine. It wasn’t really common for a guy to be there and my bum was lovingly slapped by some of the women on their way to the loo.

That’s why I know that there is always something going on in the loo.

My idea for you would be to drink a little less and love a little more. Love as in making love.
And never give up trying for happiness and very good writes….

But hey, it’s only me. I read your writes no matter what.
Kind regards, Gus

Keep on write and keep on tasting the cotton candy. Don’t give up.

You are super talented. Don’t leave!

Wow! That was a very sensual reminiscence. You really brought the imagery here

Hoi hoi

Wow! If this isn’t a declaration of love, I don’t know what is.
What a beautiful write!
A great thing you posted it!

Kind regards, Gus

I enjoy writing about this type of memory. Thanks for reading! Always grateful for your visits and comments.

Loss of innocence written with impressionist imagery that captivate me as I read. Very well done indeed.

John

Exceptional ink my friend .. thank heaven for memories eh & of course for poetry .. Neville 😎👍