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Read Morewith culted bane I speak profaneobscure morose, masturbating my insanitydilligently scribing my death daystime spent in the company of demonstalking to the world through a fogno one to tell, no one believes meon specters and ghostsfaulty little imperfection I...
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thank you dearest Jim no one but God ever see the worst of me…I keep a reign over myself the best I can… I am dark ❤️I appreciate your thoughts…
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excellent write
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thank you graciously dearest poet I see you changed your pen name ❤️
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It happens sometimes, I guess. I’ve been erected, it’s nice. lol :))
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🙂 🙂
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The title alone is gonna draw reads, but it seems like a great series, good luck
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Thank you. I rarely write on this theme. But I am glad I managed to write it long time ago, for whom partner I do not remember. It must have been one of them. 🙂
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Oh my! I been think this for some time. Whoever it may have been – was lucky.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Marvelous. Nice work.
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Thank you a lot. I appreciate it.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Read MoreHIBERNATIONI have a windowless closetin my apartment that Isometimes lock myself inand use it as a deprivation chamber.I know that sounds weird butit shuts me off from all stimuli.Locks are on the inside.I have my knife with meI use...
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Closets and cemeteries are nice places for isolating yourself from the outside world.
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Paula
This is a similar themed piece to one I’ve been trying to write for ages.You’ve done a great job asking question about the decisions we make.
We both know every action starts with a thought and that’s where the mind comes into play.If we’re fully awake and listening,our minds will see what the consequences of our actions will be.
I for one try to remember “no harm to any sentient being”, not always easy do.
I believe if a person’s intentions are good then, regardless of the law or societal norms, their actions are good.I’ve preached enough, when all I wanted to say was….great write.
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Thanks
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