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Harriet-Jacqui xx posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Blue Pool
A young man sipped limoncello, in a bar in the village square,
He was lonely and heartbroken, you would often find him there,
His heart was filled with sorrow, he felt twisted and torn inside,
When a waitress in a black dress, came and whispered as he cried,
‘Do you know there’s a blue pool, born out of the mountain str…Read More![]()
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Better safe than sorry, so no sorries, please! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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![Profile picture of Brandon Houser]()
This was touching to me. Tugged at my heart Fia.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you Brandon:))
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
There’s a lot of people feeling like this these days, Fia. I can relate.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Yes, there are. Thank you Tim:))
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Excellent write Fia …straight from your heart into mine.
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Thank you Peter;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write that gives me musing vibes my friend. You know how I dig your musings. Amazing work as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Yes definitely a musing vibe cuz. Thank you Damian 😊
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![Profile picture of Knight]()
This is very real. Truthful and strangely uplifting.
Regards
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Thank you, Knight;))
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That last line is a stone dropping into the pond. Solid slap of reality. Doesn’t stop us reaching, does it?
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
No it doesn’t. We keep going. Thank you Willow 😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write my friend. There is a longing in the words of this one. Nicely done.
Damian
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There’s a sense of almost but not quite saying. A dance around the edges of something. Damian is right. There is a longing ringing through this one.
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![Profile picture of Brandon Houser]()
I like both yours and Damian’s observations. I was playing with words with a longing vibe that day. I am glad you both can see that. Thank you for reading.
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Hey Brandon!
There is longing but also a smidge of courage.
Letting someone watch you in real time falling is no joke.
Being vulnerable when it comes to longing isn’t easy.
Takes courage to put yourself out there.
I also enjoyed all the rhyming too.
It’s got meter and rhythm. Very nicely done!-
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Thank you!
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hello dearest Brandon this is deep I understand the need to fulfill your fantasies in real time this is great ❤️
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Brandon Houser and
Adelphina are now friends
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Harriet-Jacqui xx posted in the group National Poetry Month
You Have Roughly…
‘We do not see things as they are, we see things as we are’ – Men
Ohm! Ohm! Ohm! Ohm!
You have roughly…
Who’s that girl? Her name’s Furl,
Ohm! Ohm! Ohm! Ohm!
You have roughly five…
Why the mask? Man, don’t ask!
Ohm! Ohm! Ohm! Ohm!
You have roughly five minutes…
What, she, say? Man, no way!
Ohm! Ohm! Ohm! Ohm!…Read More![]()
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While I fancy myself a romantic, I think I will avoid this Blue Pool. I have loved a few times and may never love again, but I think I do not want to play the fool. Her pool is enticing, her lips warm with arousal, but dear lady, I will remain on this stool. Sorry HJx, I hope you don’t mind where my mind went as I read your poem. -Curt