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Ooo, did it now. Nice;)
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I love it when you skip the conventional, and just flow like spilt honey all over the page, Fia – encore! x
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Thank you Hjx
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Great use of words and rhymes. Awesome job here.
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Thank you ..I appreciate that Vision;))
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A sensual poem, written with the precision of a master key. Or should I say: Mistress key!
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Haha, thank you M.E;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. A very seductive write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊
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Oh damn! That’s some fierce wordplay there! You built that to perfection!
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Thank you Willow 😊
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Amazingly written.. I’m looking for more.. ☺️
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Haha thank you Christopher 😊
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Key
When did you get the key to my door
It’s been locked for so long
I remember when I put the bolt and nail it to the floor
Fear and hurt infused the metal like a song
You inserted a key
Turned it to the right
I stood before you
I the softest moonlight
You really looked at me
Realizing what I was w…Read More
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What a subtle erotic poem Fia. The key turns, oh the possibilities!! -Curt
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Thank you. I wanted to play on using object as terms for intimacy
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Damian DeadLove and
Where Rivers Wander are now friends
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Brandon Houser wrote a new post
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Read MoreTo dance in the shadowswhere the current hums.Dancing to watch the fire risein a pen whose words are not mine.Yet I write.......And with each strokethe page is lava.The page is a strangerI will never touch.But still I write.......The pen...
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write my friend. Sometimes all you can do is enjoy the ride when it comes to writing. I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian! Happy Friday to you!
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This is good Brandon. I love seeing how people write about the pen and paper experience.
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I appreciate that! How many times have any of us sit and looked at something we wrote and were gobsmacked wondering where it came from?
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I love the repetition of “I write” in this. It highlights each of the longing thoughts perfectly. Much enjoyed!
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Thank you 🙂
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Sometimes it flows and sometimes it’s a struggle.
I appreciate the honesty in this!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post
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Read MoreBalding age of wisdom and the world grows oldHair continues to fall out, the truth has been toldI'll continue to repeat myself, hopefully it makes you forgetRunning on empty is rewarding, but not cool if you're on a jet Cataracts,...
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Now that is depressing. I feel sorry for him. Watching porn through Cataracs. That sucks lol
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Yes it does. Thanks Fia
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write with clever wordplay my friend. Dig this brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend. Always appreciated!
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definitely more… crap… this touched me more than you think