Beautifully penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! You know I love poems that have talk of music in them. Great write my friend. Love the layout and the creativity, nice execution on the difficulty. Appreciate you.

Damian

Groovy piece my friend. Lets a take a trip on a magic ocean. Everything will be real fine. Peace to you my dear friend.

Obrigado! ❤

Brenda, this absolutely breaks the heart. I am sending you so much love & the biggest hug

Powerful work. Heartbreaking.

Heartbreaking write, Brenda. This is powerfully penned my friend. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.

Damian

My deepest condolences to you & your family Brenda. Beautifully written my dear friend. Xox

Love this… great job Damion…

This post, at first blush, leaves me with what to disagree with. After a second read, and seeing the layers underneath, it is powerful and insists that one consider it on the deeper level. Many thanks and blessings. <3 Echo

Fist in the air, I’m over here going “Yeah! And…yeah!” All the way through this one. I remember this one & I’m glad she followed you over. Some truths should never fade into darkness. Favorite line:

Only way to quit the lie is to go cold turkey

That is gold, my friend

Raw and gritty. Love it.

Totally agree…
We got a shitstorm of rhetoric and meaningless ambiguity to wade through. I remember the term “Double Speak” from Orwell’s 1984. So legitimate. The dude had the future pegged.

What we need round here is another Nostradamus and some hymnals.

Great write

Love your raw writing man ❤️‍🔥

Phenomenal piece Damian. Nice work.

Lovely.

Thank you a lot for the support. Hugs and love.