A great metaphorical poem, Thomas.

this is beautiful in its expression excellent 💕writing is very much the same for me…

great write dearest Thomas very excellent I feel you on this 💕

So many great, relatable metaphors in this. I enjoyed this.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

lol. Thank you.

Thank you 😊

Grandma knew exactly what to do with us. 6 of us & she never lost her temper. Good memories…Thank you, girl

hello beautiful Willow this was a twist I didn’t know where you were going it’s very clever and relateable I had to clean my dad’s grandfather clock when naughty 💕

Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Amazing storytelling my friend, I can relate. Not that I got in trouble a lot, but when I did, not a fun time by any means of the imagination. Excellent work, as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love “old timey” pieces. It brings back the good ol days, even if we didn’t know that they were, then. I would’ve preferred the chair over the usual ass whuppin.
But eh, I survived.
It’s always interesting to me how others lived and dealt with their own upbringings. This was a wonderful story indeed. I raised my kids on “time out” instead of spankings, as your story reflects. It’s a better choice.
Very entertaining write, Willow. Bravo.

It’s good to see YOU here, too.

Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

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