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Read MoreThey don their masks For political embraceA circus act In a high stakes placeOne side cries out"Democracy's dying"Speaking loudly To hide their lying They shout of fraudWith riteous flairThen gerrymander statesKeeping voting unfairProtect the voteThey chant and cheerWhile closing polls Year after yearThen claim...
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Thank you for reading..yeah political writes are dangerous and it’s a quick way to make many ppl mad..I see flaws with our government in general..on both sides..and I honestly don’t think either side works for our best interest..thanks again for commenting
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This is insightful without being preached to. I also enjoyed the rhythm in this too.
Great message with styleI enjoyed the read.
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Glad you enjoyed..unfortunately politics are topical so sometimes it warrants being written about..the climate of our government is toxicly boiling.. thank you for commenting..I appreciate it
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Read MoreAnytime I say a word,I finger-tip the net of your nerve.Draw a physical on your haze.Like now. I want to drawPink jasmineOn the canvas of your head.
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Please
on my head
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Ok. As you wish. 🙂
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Oh!!? I’d love to make several suggestions. Not just a wish, but a vivid day/night dream. I think you are very powerful dear.
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Thank you. 🙂
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You made my day dear. Poetry is my life and being percepted in a good way causes an erupting volcano in me. Take care.
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Wise words.
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FlatDaddy and
Backdeckbenny (Peter) are now friends
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Read MoreHow did I forget your faceWhen I can still feel your embraceHow can I still smell youBut fail to recognize these pictures in which I held youMy disease is the worstAt least that's what people say when they remind...
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Excellent lyrics my friend, your work is so authentic and direct. I’m truly a fan, good musical choice as well. The piano added the proper element to your words. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I always love reading your thoughts on my work. Appreciate you!
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I love a good piano song. This feels very intimate and un-rushed.
It has a great tempo too. There are not a lot of distractions either. Just a voice and a piano.
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Thank you so much! Your words bring warmth to my heart ❤️
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Adelphina was raving about this to me earlier, so I had to check it out. And it’s really good! Not syrupy or overdone. It’s catchy and very entertaining. Awesome job with it.
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Thank you for your kind words Styxian. I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it!
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Drieks, I smiled the whole way through listening to this. This was sad but catchy.
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Thank you Fia! So happy to make you smile! 💕
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I man…damn. This is incredibly well done!
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Thank you so much Willow! ❤️
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
If only it was my own voice… Can’t take credit for that. -
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❤️
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We’ve kept up wit your musical success through mutual friends, and we’re truly happy for you. You’re not only creating great poetry but also great songs. Tight
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Thank you so much for the kind words!
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Great song. I loved the piano and the strength of the vocals. Well done!
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Thank you RPM! I appreciate it.
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Wow. Just wow! Another incredible piece. You are doing marvelous work, my friend. This is truly outstanding. Beautiful words, lovely music and all of it rendered with class. I am so glad that HER said I must talk to you. I would very much like to do that.
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Thank you so much! I’ll get back to you tomorrow if that’s ok 🙏🏻
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Absolutely.
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Read MoreI don't know whose idea it was.To make the villains attractive at first sight.Whose choice was it and why? Why do we feel attraction or fly?Oh,and why can't it be the good guy?Standing there,catching my eye. But being attracted to the...
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I steer clear of political stuff (and raunchy porn.)
But your write is very well done. Not severe in its judgements, but insightful. This is the way to open people’s eyes and minds. With maturity within a write. You succeed here.
Well done, sir.