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Read MoreThe Rent Whips my back Leaving deep scars The Rent Keeps me from sleep It keeps me from sleep The Rent Binds my dreams The Rent Binds my thoughts Snuffs my desire Dousing my fire The Rent Wrecks my mind My mind is all I have And I'm going insane My mind is all I...
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Thanks for reading.
I feel we over pay for every breath you take.
Regards James
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Over pay is right. You exemplify that very well in this piece.
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Oh my goodness, I really like how intense that reading is. I agree that the rent is too high
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Yes, the rent of living is high. Every thing is rented. The air, the time, the moments of our lives, every second is paid for. And it goes up every day.
Thanks for reading and listening
Regards James
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hello dearest James I know the feeling this is wonderful I feel the pain of it ❤️
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Every moment costs money and it just rises and rises. I feel it. I see what it does to people.
It cost a lot to exist.Thanks for reading
Regards James
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Read MoreThey say fire and ice can't be together.But how come we feel a connection however?She was fire,passion and desire. She would melt the coldest of hearts.And understands most of the parts.Her hair is made of flame. Her heart made ablame.Her skin...
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Aww Fire and ice can go together, and you proved it with this write.
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The darkness has a power of its own at times. Especially when one is alone and thinking of someone that sets them on fire with lust. This is one of those dark writes, but an alluring one to. Well done, crimsin. 🙂
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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously for your insight on this write it’s deeply appreciated ❤️
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Your poetry lives deep within my heart forever. Even if I don’t get a chance to read your work for a few weeks, your words and poetry always amaze me. xo
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hello dearest Keith I’ve missed you… you do me great honor with your thoughts thank you my friend…I deeply appreciate the love you show me the affection is returned ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian you move me with your thoughts ❤️
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Read MoreShe Walks in the Light She walks in the light As the sunset radiates around on her hair Like a vision to be held In reverence of elegance, glare and flair She treads with a glow As the sun bathes her skin and silhouette Like a...
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This is sweet. “She moves in rhythm as the sun outlines her form.” I enjoyed this.
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Thank you Fia. It’s been a while since I’ve written so I’m was trying to get into the “groove” of things too.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I’m trying to find my groove back.
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I love this!
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Thank you, my dear.
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This is spot on. Your passion about art is as vivid as one could reveal. Your a true artist Paulo.
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Art hurts, art is a nail in a guilty as hell criminal’s hand.
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If Art was a dude, we’d be kicking his ass for taking up so much of our time!
yet, it’s a drug, and we are addicted.
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Art hurts, art is a nail in a guilty as hell criminal’s hand.
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Art hurts, art is a nail in a guilty as hell criminal’s hand.
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Eternally caught red-handed.
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Powerfully penned, PAR. Excellent write my friend, you always bring the thunder. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, my dear friend. Once, a friend said to me: “Paulo, you are like the sound of thunder at the bottom of the deepest sea.” I’ll do my best to keep thundering.
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Thank you for sharing this. A very direct and insightful poem, I really appreciate the “whipping” euphemism for rent. Hit the nail on the head!