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      • 10 months ago
      Together
      Poetry
      December 5, 2025
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      I wonder what you are doing nowAre you getting boredLike I am nowYou in the hostelAnd I here in the barIn the middle of the nightIt would be less lonelyIf we were together.

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      • 10 months ago

      bi-trillets attempt. this one wasn’t easy for me…never do well when rhymin is involved.

      endless night confession

      breathe in the black smoke, love feels like a joke
      the nights we wasted tasted strange
      cheap liquor kiss, dirty exchange

      you were my worst itch, struck like a kill switch
      old barroom lungs in borrowed light
      we swore we’…Read More

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        RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
        10 months ago

        A brilliant submittal, Syr Dru 🥂

        Congratulations on another successfully excellent effort in displaying such admirable skill in the true essence and grasp of that which is conveyed in these earnestly shared teaching sessions.

        Your poetic potential is second to none … this piece is spot-on in every sense of the phrase: meter, poetic voice, i…Read More

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          twofiftythree
          10 months ago

          I wonder if we are readin the same poem. I really expected this one to get marked up with a red pen on all the places I went wrong. I appreciate your input and the lessons you’re providin. I’ll agree with you on fixin the rhyme so I’ll add the s to pain. but you’re gonna have to pry my lowercase letters and lack of punctuation from my cold dead ha…Read More

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      His Hair
      Poetry, Romance, Short Stories
      December 5, 2025
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      His hair is charcoal,pitch black.His hair is shiny and not matte.They say if you look upclose. You'll find the sparkling galaxy.Above with the suns,stars and planets.I know that in his hair landscape is also a moon. That glows brightly and won't...

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      Fire
      Poetry
      December 4, 2025
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      Talk to meA word from youLights up a fireOn this winter day.

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      Theiving Hands
      Poetry, Spirituality
      December 4, 2025
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      We roam On the pavements of the Earth Riding the buses of the world Weaving in and out Of the fingers Into the palms Of the thieving hands Above Long drilling nails Dug into this land Scratching at the soul

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