Beautiful, no one treats life as a gift.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

What I love about this is the double reflection. The reflection of the writer and the reflection of lights on the freeway. They blend beautifully into something very deep and human

I appreciate it.

I think this is probably my most favouwritest of your little masterpieces to date Thomas .. actually, I’m pretty sure its write up there near the summit .. Neville

Thank you, my friend.

Powerfully penned, Nick. Brutally honest write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like how in the first stanza, you start out hazy and that no cares, then the next you explain the addiction and how everyone should relate in one form or another, because there are so many different addictions. Then you come back at the end and want to know who your true friends are.
You lead the reader of this very nicely. Good write Nick;))

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Warm sexy and intimate…..a smooth elixir no doubt

Much respect

Naaj

This is a wonderful, intimate and tender poem , dear Crimsin! The imagery is amazing and cleverly chosen!

…an oasis of dreams. Fantastic, Brenda!

Sensual, symbolic, and steeped in metaphor—this feels like desire rendered as prayer.

Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend, your words are pointed like jagged teeth. Which helps get the message home. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

I feel that we all have been infected and it is hard to heal when the world keeps picking at the scab. Nicely done