Powerfully penned, Brenda. Very heartfelt write my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like the options but you can stay a leaf and observe, but then again, they may sweep you away.

Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is a strong piece my favorite part is
“Anger expressed on my face
My blackened heart I can’t replace
The rage I have, I’m full of hate
My pins been pulled ready to detonate
No filter on the words I say”

The rhythm of this piece is nice.
I like the first two lines, it’s like you can put it on a loop.

Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You are such a strong woman, Brenda. Many don’t hesitate to lash out and slash those wronging them. But you know the power of words. 🧡

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Words are weapons and writers know how to use them, showing restraint takes self discipline. Especially against those who provoke us. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

I can absolutely relate to your poem, dear Crimsin. The strong wish not to hurt anybody makes sensitive people think that they have caused a conflict and are simply not lovable. Never forget that your loving heart and the power of your words are a most effective weapon and armor. Great work!

An eye for an eye brings no satisfaction, the loss still exist and nothing can replace it. Tight