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Read MoreTime began with voicesWhispering in the headThey often made the choicesEnshrouded with dreadWhat do they want?Loud with decisionsWhy do they taunt?Constant collisions But along came youA goofy smile spreadYou were troubled tooTogether we treadA cheek to kissA hand to holdHere...
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Read MoreShe carried his cards and letters,bundled with a rubber band,in her yellow raincoat. He stood on the motel roof,watching the freeway paint the night,headlights begging the question,Will I ever get it right? She mumbles from below.Depends if you take the right...
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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A trip into your mind, reveals how damaged we are as no one is set free. Unfiltered brilliance in your poetry & how you cut through the grit with your ideas. Great!
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I appreciate it.
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What I love about this is the double reflection. The reflection of the writer and the reflection of lights on the freeway. They blend beautifully into something very deep and human
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Thank you so much Willow.
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I think this is probably my most favouwritest of your little masterpieces to date Thomas .. actually, I’m pretty sure its write up there near the summit .. Neville
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Thank you, my friend.
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Read Morehead's all up in a haze no one cares for me oh well, it's all i have to say telling myself it'll be ok morning will shine light some other day ups and downs, right now diving in a tailspin thinking i need to rethink...
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Brutally honest write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how in the first stanza, you start out hazy and that no cares, then the next you explain the addiction and how everyone should relate in one form or another, because there are so many different addictions. Then you come back at the end and want to know who your true friends are.
You lead the reader of this very nicely. Good write Nick;))
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Warm sexy and intimate…..a smooth elixir no doubt
Much respect
Naaj
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This is a wonderful, intimate and tender poem , dear Crimsin! The imagery is amazing and cleverly chosen!
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Lovely Brenda. This is delicate and heartwarming. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo
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…an oasis of dreams. Fantastic, Brenda!
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Sensual, symbolic, and steeped in metaphor—this feels like desire rendered as prayer.
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend, your words are pointed like jagged teeth. Which helps get the message home. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Happy holidays.
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I feel that we all have been infected and it is hard to heal when the world keeps picking at the scab. Nicely done
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![Profile picture of Amethyste]()
Yes unfortunately it is very true Fia. I have a lot of work with myself, and sometimes it is not easy.
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Beautiful, no one treats life as a gift.