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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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![Profile picture of NAAJIR]()
Haha!!! One of the realest testimonies [poems] I’ve ever read
Real talk on both ends [perspectives]
Dope shit and much neededMuch respect
Naaj
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We all have traveled that road of regret. And some are still on it with no off ramp.
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This has some unexpected twists and turns.
But it is indeed, a reality check for some.
If only she had fertility issues. It wouldn’t be a nightmare unfolding. x
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Twist and turns in the process of regret can lead to negativity.
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That’s true.
Some difficult circumstances to overcome.
I admire the originality of the piece. And how it is so realistic.
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I have lived it many times throughout my life. Now being older, wisdom has prevented me from making some of the same mistakes.
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That’s the best way.
Let some other fool be the victim.
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That’s a funny and truthful poem! Well written!! Thanks!
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One of those hard truths in life many learn.
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Yeah.. a lesson you have to experience to learn.. :^/
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Read Morebeauty…is in the eye of the beholder…so they say…“as if” my thoughts cajoled herbrilliant…is the glow of her presence for all to seeexuding a celestial essencetonight…an umbra accentuates her pirouettefor one dance onlya stunningly deep red silhouette shimmering…is the veil...
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Beautifully penned, Angel. Excellent write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, thanks for the appreciative welcome. I see you have posted a lot of material on your page. I look forward to reading some of your work.
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I like the way you start off every stanza with a single word and build on it. Lovely work. Welcome to Stars Rite
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![Profile picture of Angel Louise]()
Fia, thanks for the welcome. Your words are kind. Yes, the single words are different than how others would write their poetry. For me, it creates a pause to help focus on the feelings and emotions I’m trying to express.
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Chère A.,
Welcome to this (Fia’s) corner of heaven.
Your verse form is very suitable for setting to music. To use as lyrics I mean.Maybe…
In the future?But for now, what a way to start!
If you’re American: thank you.
In all other cases: keep them coming please.Kind regards, Gus
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Duhsjaak, thanks for your welcoming comments. Most of my writing is based on interpretation of musical melody and song lyrics. I’ve never actually thought of my poems as song before. That is an interesting consideration.
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I thourghly enjoyed this and welcome to Stars.
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Atticus, thanks for your welcome. I am happy you enjoyed my celestial interpretation of the Eagles song.
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Read MoreMy father died two years ago. It's hard to say exactly, although the moment of his death was definitely there. However, the definition of this moment has always raised questions. At first, death was associated with a simple respiratory...
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This is an interesting conversation between the two (father and daughter). the opening about how the body reacts even though it is deceased is and interesting opening.
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Thank you very much. I’m glad my story has interested you 🙂
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I regret not having read this, your latest dollop of smut, earlier, CS! HJx