Hi,

Very beautiful lines in hindi.
In native language the poetry looked still more original.

Jessy Jacob

By the way you were not searchable for some time. I looked for you but you were not here.

I love the this. This had me swaying and relating to the words. I agree keep these coming.

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics as always my friend. Your flow and wordplay are simply amazing. Love the reggae vibe it accompanied your words smoothly. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much Gus! 🙏

Interesting take on Eden. I like this

Powerfully penned, Brandon. I concur with Fia.. None the less this is an excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian