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Duhsjaak
3 months, 4 weeks ago

chèr D.,
Amen to that.
I’ll be back tomorrow to read it again.

Kind regards, Gus
- Damian DeadLove
  3 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Gus. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Come back as often as you’d like. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Detritus
3 months, 4 weeks ago

Your wallop of a write had me nodding in agreement. So many truths are nestled in every line. Love will indeed live forever! Outstanding write, my friend.

Clay
- Damian DeadLove
  3 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Clay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your support. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Fia Naturie
3 months, 4 weeks ago

Well said. No body is promised tomorrow.
- Damian DeadLove
  3 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Exactly, nobody is promised tomorrow. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
Visions_of_Insanity
3 months, 4 weeks ago

That last stanza sends this one home. Wonderful piece Damian.
- Damian DeadLove
  3 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. My favorite stanza as well. Appreciate you.
Honoria
3 months, 4 weeks ago

Dear D,

Inspirational to be sure. This write was a movie short where I could envision the hero if the piece roaming from one stanza to the next recognizing the differentiation of God and truth vs ai and evil. Great write. H🌷
- Damian DeadLove
  3 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for sharing that wonderful vision with me, I like the lens you’re looking through. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
NAAJIR
3 months, 3 weeks ago

” Shadows on the wall are growing

Coming to poison what God built ”

Those words were written with a hammer and chisel.

Dope overall vibe
Diggin the positive outro, brother…

Much respect

Naaj
- Damian DeadLove
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I dig those lines as well. Thank you for your continued support my brother. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Willow
3 months, 3 weeks ago

Sigh…where to start? I agree with Naaj up there. 👆 Those lines are definitely carved in granite. There’s a loss of humanity occurring on so many levels today. AI is replacing human labor, taking human paychecks and means of living. But AI does what man tells it. It’s not out there knocking on doors and handing out resumes. It’s the greed of man dehumanizing their fellows that’s doing the damage. The fact that we have a deranged overstuffed cheese puff feeding frenzy to his blind acolytes speaks volumes for the state of man’s moral compass right now. Every decision they’re making is destructive…to the earth (our host) and to its guests (us and wildlife). Yeah, I got rolling but this one took me to so many places. Keep carving those lines, my friend, and I’m sure I’ll keep ranting
- Damian DeadLove
  3 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Like I told Naaj, I love those lines as well. I agree with you as I tend to do, I saw a story today where Chat GPT is causing people to commit crimes and hurt others and themselves. It needs to be regulated at the very least, but that ain’t happening with the Cheeto in power. These tech bros are accessories to the most corrupt regime after all. Man’s moral compass is damn near broken. lol. Always enjoy your commentary, even though I get you riled up. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

Damian DeadLove
4 months ago

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
NAAJIR
4 months ago

Warm sexy and intimate…..a smooth elixir no doubt

Much respect

Naaj
Sappho (Elke)
4 months ago

This is a wonderful, intimate and tender poem , dear Crimsin! The imagery is amazing and cleverly chosen!
Visions_of_Insanity
4 months ago

Lovely Brenda. This is delicate and heartwarming. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo
Atticus Abbey
4 months ago

…an oasis of dreams. Fantastic, Brenda!
Thomas W. Case
4 months ago

Sensual, symbolic, and steeped in metaphor—this feels like desire rendered as prayer.

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