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Damian DeadLove posted in the group Music is Art
Fia, This is the song that defined my teenage years. As always the lyrics are key. They will be down below. This is my favorite version and performance off of MTV’s Unplugged.
Oh, hello Mr. Soul, I dropped by to pick up a reason
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Four minutes left
Just like my words
Leaving me in my time of need
It does not matter what I do because the words wont come out
Two minutes left
I am done for and its for the best
Its pressure on top of pressure
No more time….
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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A fine musing, Fia. Amazing under pressure write my friend. You’re clutch. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Raise a marshmallow to soon! It’s well past time. And again, another one that fits as well as the day it was mused, my friend
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Great piece Damian. You’re the spokesperson for the demise of our country. This piece is remarkable.
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While false idols continue to make war, this work summons a Jesus who refuses salvation and a Non‑Jesus who refuses erasure. They move like twin shadows, circling the wound the world keeps reopening. Nothing here seeks redemption. Instead, the performance asks who is allowed to carry a name that has been used to bless both mercy and violence. The ritual is not an answer, it is a reckoning.
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Damn. I read several gut punches this morning, but, my friend, I think I will stop at yours because no other gut punch will top this one for now. Powerful read. Great stuff!
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Damian, the sheer velocity of this as it rocketed through the false prophets that surround us and unveiled their true nature showed them for what the are. The rich man not having a crumb under the table for the poor and taking them for all they have. I could both feel and see this through the unflinching eyes of the great poet you are. You told it like it truly is behind the smoke screens. Appreciate you.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m kinda of obsessed with the truth that hides behind the smokescreens. I feel the obligation to expose what lies were meant to remain hidden I guess, always have, even as a younger poet. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like this stanza “I’m cautious in my approach, with proper reverence given to the forces greater than I” I enjoyed this Crimsin