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April 19, 2025

Another lover of words and slang There’s no going back to handjobs Falling short of a sonic gang-bang Her love aches the tension throbs We are both believers in foreplay Syncopated tongues paint delight Against the tide we begin...

9 Comments

Damian DeadLove
1 year, 2 months ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I’d like to think we do. Appreciate you.

Damian
Fia Naturie
1 year, 2 months ago

Yes.this is tender and erotic. Beautiful
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Thomas W. Case
1 year, 2 months ago

Beautiful work, my friend.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the write. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Honoria
1 year, 2 months ago

Dear D,

I enjoyed the meter of this piece. It has just enough edge but lets the reader create their own scenario without all the graphics. Excellent write. H🌷
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I’m not a natural erotic writer, but I lean towards not revealing all the cards. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Thomas W. Case
1 year, 2 months ago

Tremendous imagery. You bring it to life.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks, Thomas. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

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