Outstanding. You are one awesome story teller P.G. Detailed, intriguing, sexy, lovely. This deserves a bookmark!! xo

This is a good opening. I like the defiance and the confidence she has.
Some Father daughter bonds are very tight. You portrayed that here.
Nice

Brilliantly penned, P.G. Amazing storytelling again my friend. I think you got the hang of this. Incredible read, I look forward to more in the series. Appreciate you.

Damian

I got you! And it’s one of those things where you think you’ve got it, but you’re not really sure. But I decided to take the plunge and here we are. I’m excited I’ve gotten so much feedback and you all are adding fuel to my fire. 😊

Keep moving forward my friend. There’s always a light at the end of the tunnel. Great poem.

It’s a lot to carry. I’ve only been in the support role for people struggling, my daughter for one. But I see how heavy it can get to keep up the mask & maintain a facade of functionality. You’re right, it changes people. Im glad you’re no longer that person, my friend

I think sometimes we get shackled by our passed. I was thinking about that while going through some of my old DUP post. It’s nice to see the creativity, but they were wrote from pain.

Great ink

The poems written from our pain, are probably my favorite. Not because they are from pain, but because something so raw, and so beautiful can come of it. This was a beautiful ode to your former self, and I’m proud of you, Damian. It’s not an easy feat, but you beat the odds and became a better version of yourself.
I wish you all the best for the future my friend.
xx

~P.G💋

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s an interesting story, sometimes anything can throw the switch, to obtain that moment of clarity. I still have like 4 beers in the fridge, that have set there for over two years. So I can relate, I keep meaning to throw them out, I just forget they are there sometimes. At first it was motivation to see them, and ignore the temptation. But I’m past that now. I’m glad you got to know your grandfather, the better version of himself. I’m a better version now as well. Thanks so much for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

This write is fire! “)

Passionately penned, P.G. A seductive write setting the page on fire my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love it! I’ll be a pyromaniac with you. Let’s ignite the world! Great poem and super creative.

Love this. It’s 🔥

Great ink