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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreSome say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
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Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
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You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
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Thank you, Wil;))l
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Heavy! Like this a lot.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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Brenda, this absolutely breaks the heart. I am sending you so much love & the biggest hug
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hello beautiful Willow thank you hugs back I will be alright I can’t help but write what I feel and everyday my mind is retracing it’a steps to the days we had together and how we got here ❤️
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Powerful work. Heartbreaking.
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hello dearest Thomas thank you for the love on this write ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Heartbreaking write, Brenda. This is powerfully penned my friend. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My deepest condolences to you & your family Brenda. Beautifully written my dear friend. Xox
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreBiased figures manipulate opportunities Power has reigned since the dawn of time Spitting rhetoric laced with dry ambiguities False sincerity acted out in full pantomime Dreams are aborted before even catching breath Harsh reality of being worked and taxed to death Programmed from a young...
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Love this… great job Damion…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This post, at first blush, leaves me with what to disagree with. After a second read, and seeing the layers underneath, it is powerful and insists that one consider it on the deeper level. Many thanks and blessings. <3 Echo
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Echo. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fist in the air, I’m over here going “Yeah! And…yeah!” All the way through this one. I remember this one & I’m glad she followed you over. Some truths should never fade into darkness. Favorite line:
Only way to quit the lie is to go cold turkey
That is gold, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved that line as well. It ranks high as one of my best in my opinion. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Raw and gritty. Love it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Totally agree…
We got a shitstorm of rhetoric and meaningless ambiguity to wade through. I remember the term “Double Speak” from Orwell’s 1984. So legitimate. The dude had the future pegged.What we need round here is another Nostradamus and some hymnals.
Great write
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He did get some of it spot on, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love your raw writing man ❤️🔥
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Poe. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Phenomenal piece Damian. Nice work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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DampKitten wrote a new post
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Read MoreLike an old man,he stares out over the still and calmat age seven,on the slick, red clayby the edge of the pondwhere his brother slipped and slidaway under the milky, glass surface,bobbing up and downlike a corkon the end...
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I don’t want to be wiping away your smile, girl.
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Different face, different smile from Adira but same effect.
There’s a few ladies on this site that I’d crawl naked over cut glass just to spend some time with….your one of them.-
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That’s such an amazing thing to say, Peter. Don’t cut yourself. I want your body unscathed so I can sign my name on your skin.
xoxoxo
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Dark and engaging . Nice spill
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Definitely and thanks!
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Powerfully penned, DK. This is an incredible write with stellar imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian!
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Outstanding. The wording, the image and the sincerity in detail makes this a marvelous piece of writing.
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When I was young, there were two kids that drowned in the pond across the street… brothers.
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WOW! Tragic.
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I will never forget it. Everyone on my street held hands and made a human chain as they walked across the pond. Unreal.
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You are too sweet, girl!
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Deeply felt. Tragic yet majestic at the same time
Much respect
Naaj
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Hey, Naajir! Thanks for the read and comment. I love hearing your thoughts.
xoxo
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I lost a little brother….🙏
So, this one hits especially close to home, Meg.
Beautifully rendered Free Verse, with all the poetic attributes that make this form so expressively powerful to read and vividly sink one’s mind, heart, emotions, and soul into.No one speaks with a poetic voice like yours!
Thank you ever-so warmly for YOU! ⁓ Richard🖌
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