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Willow
2 weeks, 5 days ago

It’s all in the details. The little nuances that leans elegantly one direction or the other. This one takes me places
- Fia Naturie
  2 weeks, 5 days ago
  
  Thank you Willow. You are right its the nuances. <3
Damian DeadLove
2 weeks, 5 days ago

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. It’s the minute details isn’t it? Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian
Rosie C
2 weeks, 4 days ago

This is a very reflective piece.

I can sense a lot of careful concentration from the writer.

I admire the determination throughout the stanzas.

This is a dark but incredible read. x

NAVINA
2 weeks, 6 days ago

Very good .. but scary vibe too. Great work ….
- Fia Naturie
  2 weeks, 3 days ago
  
  Thank you, Navina;)
  - NAVINA
    2 weeks, 3 days ago
    
    Of course 🤗
Harriet-Jacqui xx
2 weeks, 6 days ago

Love it when you’re pitch dark, Fia. HJx
- Fia Naturie
  2 weeks, 3 days ago
  
  Thank you Hjx

Atticus Abbey
3 weeks ago

Simple…but so emotional. Good one, Fia.
- Fia Naturie
  2 weeks, 6 days ago
  
  Thank you , Atticus;))
Visions_of_Insanity
2 weeks, 6 days ago

A wonderful piece of poetry Fia. This one hits home, literally.
- Fia Naturie
  2 weeks, 6 days ago
  
  Thank you, Vision;))
Willow
2 weeks, 6 days ago

Yeah…so much said in this. My daughter talks of not belonging anywhere. She’s not Mexican enough for that side of her genealogy and not white enough for the other. Never accepted in either. This cataloging of labels in a stolen land is mind boggling and saddening to me
Damian DeadLove
2 weeks, 6 days ago

Powerfully penned, Fia. This excellent write tells it like it is my friend. Amazingly done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

redzone
3 weeks ago

In Indigenous culture and belief, no one owns the land, we inherit it and are part of it and must share and protect it, leaving it in better shape for future generations. I think this is a much better culture, belief, and morality than what we have in today’s world. I like your poem because it points to this kind of understanding. A very fitting…Read More
- Fia Naturie
  2 weeks, 3 days ago
  
  Thank you Curtis;))

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