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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Challenge Are you up for it?

Poetry

August 30, 2025

4

Calling all those who fish I have an idea that's delish Can you write about the catch Not the one that you threw back I have a Twist in mind Not all fish are one of a kind The catch can be by sea or...

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4 Comments
- Crimsin
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  this makes me think of metaphors for getting with someone romatically and going to the flea market and haggling for the write price haggling with a whore sorry Fia it’s the images your challenge brought 💕
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    It’s fine. Go for it and write crimsin
    - Backdeckbenny (Peter)
      9 months, 2 weeks ago
      
      I cast desire upon the tide,
      My fingers tremble for her weight
      A secret urge I cannot hide,
      My bait a promise, sweet as fate.
      
      She rises shimmering, bare and bold,
      Her flanks and curve inflame the air
      Enticing as forbidden gold,
      She stirs my blood with fevered dare.
      
      She fights, resists, with sultry grace,
      Her finish slick against my skin;
      The pull, the yield, our swift embrace
      She swallows lust, I drink her in.
      
      On shore, still dripping wet with lust,
      Her form revealed, full-bodied, wild
      We meet as lovers, freed and flushed
      My catch, my craving, reconciled
      
      Fia Naturie
      9 months, 2 weeks ago
      
      Oh wow, Peter that was good
      Thank you for participating
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Another Problem Solved

Poetry

August 30, 2025

16

How can I miss you? When you never go away Water’s wet sky is blue Perpetual victim falls prey Outside in the distance A stranger lies in wait Steeped in persistence Always guarding the gate When did I get wise? Is the proper question As soon as a crow...

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14 Comments
- Honoria
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Dear D,
  
  You still got it. An incredible meter. Made me want to sing this. The imagery played in my head of a dark bus stop. Why? No clue. But the players in this piece for me, were intertwined. Trying to run but wanting to stay. I have a longer version running in my head but I’ll spare you the directors cut😊
  Wonderful write. H🌷
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I sometimes have that effect, it’s just the lyricist in me. lol. I always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Haha great end there, friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked it as well. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Anything is on the table, maybe even spoken word. Never say never. The song I’m working on, I literally had to start writing lyrics to it. None of the old words were fitting the vibe. Also, I haven’t tried to write a song for many summers now. I kinda forgot sometimes the music leads the dance. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Fia Naturie
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I remember this piece. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoy it now. Nice Damian.;))
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool! Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Crimsin
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Tremendous
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Neville
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Something tells me this is so good .. I got a foot that can’t stop tapping .. 😎👍
  - Damian DeadLove
    7 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 9 months, 2 weeks ago

melancholy

Poetry, Spirituality, Uncategorized

August 29, 2025

4

dreamy thoughts with visions of sadnesswatching her before medancing in the wind wild hair flowingwith delicate shades of blue she exudesgentle with my feelingsshe comes to visit oftentender girl with a soft voicemelanchly haunt a little slip of a...

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4 Comments
- Average Joe
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Broken childhoods can still turn into beautiful things. The Japanese call it the art of kintsugi 🌼
  - Crimsin
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    hello dearest Joe yes they can I don’t feel sadness is my enemy but teacher thank you for the lovely comment 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here 💕
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Poetry Is...

Poetry

August 29, 2025

12

What I can't understand is how poetry falls into my hand like glittering stars in the sky. I picked one I can't lie. The pull it has over me to give it to all of you. You say I've given so many away I Hoping that...

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12 Comments
- Crimsin
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I hear you beautiful Fia people take them too seriously which hinders our creativity as it just flows I went through an anger period when I was going through a tough time and lost a lot of followers because of it peace to you lady let it come as it will 💕
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, crimsin ;))
- Average Joe
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Its a gift to be able to express feeling with words..I’m glad you have the gift 🌼
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Joe ;))
- Benjamin Scraps
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Words have serious magical power….that’s why we call it SPELLING. I’m sure you’ve that one before, but it’s true. Where do thoughts and inspiration come from? Poetry is the great filter. Use responsibly.
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    You are correct. Thank you Benjamin;))
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Cleverly penned, Fia. I always enjoy your musings. Phenomenal write, cuz. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Appreciate that,cuz
- Nick DC
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I think of my poetry as not by me. It’s by little ghost in my ear nagging me till I write their words down hehe. Wonderful ink, friend.
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Nick😊
- Willow
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I can’t even count the emotions I’ve given ink to. Without poetry…I have no voice. Without a voice…we fade. Very nice
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Willow;))
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 9 months, 2 weeks ago

You Claim to Understand

Poetry

August 28, 2025

16

I never asked to shoulder your weightBut here I amWith every burden I takeYou don’t give a damnYou assume I don't feelBecause you read what I wroteYou assume I am healedYou're wrong. I stand here brokeI strive every day to...

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16 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Fia. Could feel these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Damian ☺️
- Detritus
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  There is true and honest pain here, so palpable I can almost touch it.
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Detritus ☺️
- Sappho (Elke)
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  A powerful piece written with heart blood. An empath can feel what is Hidden behind the words. Vibrations speak louder and clearer than words. Great work Fia!
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Sappho, appreciate that:))
- Nick DC
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  One of the hardest things is trying to help and being pushed away.
  
  Great ink, friend.
- Fia Naturie
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thank you, Nick;))
- Paula Jobi
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  So true. I can write it down…to give me release for the moment at hand. But somethings live on forever. You can’t delete it. I wish I could. Oh no! Another thought coming on!!!
- Paula Jobi
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  I just wrote Edit My Life after writing my comment.
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Haha you were inspired? cool
- Paula Jobi
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  It seems that a lot of times, when I comment on someone’s work, the way I relate turns into my own next submission.
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    It happens to me sometimes. I enjoyed it.
- Paula Jobi
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Thanks
- Knight
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  I feel this. The weight of another persons sorrow. A moving piece.
  Kind regards
  James
  - Fia Naturie
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thank you, James;))
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