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Read MorePressing my chest against your backI lean to smell your lovely neckYour fragrant lotion entices meIt moistens your skin, so intoxicating!I’m so ready to be inside of you!You’re less certain, I must wait for youSo I reach for your...
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Thanks, Fia. And thanks for leading the way on providing comments on this site!
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You are welcome;))
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Love how the foreplay unfolds here so tenderly and not rushed. You write the scene with exquisite detail of sensual feelings and sensation. I could see it all so perfectly.
John
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So glad you could envision it John. Grateful for your comment!
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read Moresomethin’ bout the way she movessubtle yet so attractivethe innocent way her body groovesshe’s a hurricane burning radioactiveseductive eyes that mystifymakes you wanna fucking danceshe’s the spider, yeah you’re the flycaught up in a web of circumstance… don’t turn your...
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That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That she was, her coordinates were lost in the late 90’s. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s high praise, and good company. What a lovely comment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well through GarageBand and Logic Pro, I’m working on that. lol. The problem with not being able to play an instrument, is that it only leaves a few options. So I’m working on a solo album to give these old lyrics a home, there will be new lyrics as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with lyrics my friend. I plan on this one making the cut, I’ve always wanted “Wicked” to have music again. It had music in 97, but it was never recorded. Thanks for your continued support it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s the theory.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I try, I always write to the beat in my head. Maybe a strip club, or some other place where human beings gather. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
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Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
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hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
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Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
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hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
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Very, tender moment described so nicely.