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Read MoreHe had seen on TVAn execution by hangingCurious he was, he triedHow it is to hangExecution means dyingHanging is not a gameExecution means dyingHe won't do it againIt was just a funny gameThis caused his own death
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Thank you my friend.
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Yes, hanging is not a game at all. It is quite uncomfortable in fact. Interesting write.
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Very uncomfortable. Thanks for the read & comment Detritus.
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A thought provoking poem, dear Keith! The curiosity of young people is needed to explore and understand this world. But sometimes we underestimate the fact that children often don’t think about possible consequences of their actions, while they are engaged in making new experiences. Meaningful and important work, my friend!
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Oh so true Elke. Your words and feedback is always appreciated. xo
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Wham. You nailed it.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciate it.
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Read MoreAs the white doves fly to freedomMy soul is captured with youTo die of coldness and violenceWhy do I let it happen to me? I hate you for loving me; I hate you for obsessing me Controlling my thoughts by your...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciated Damian.
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This is a powerful, deeply moving piece, my friend! Too many people confuse the claim to possess somebody with love. Love blooms only in freedom and mutual respect! Especially the sentence ‘I hate you for loving mé’ cuts like a knife.
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Hello Elke. Thanks for the read and wonderful comment.
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Read MoreBeautiful safety devicesDuring a heavy car crashAt a busy intersectionThey acted like an airbag Thanks to her silicone breastsFake boobs for safety on boardImplants protected her organsFake boobs for safety on board40DD was enhanced enoughFake boobs for safety on boardArtificial...
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Phenomenally penned, Keith. Clever write my friend. They might also work as flotation devices as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks!
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“hoping you still see something redeemable in me” That is powerful, crimsin
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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Magnificent write Brenda. The sadness of this piece lured me in.
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thank you graciously dearest Keith for the love on this ❤️
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Brilliantly penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As I read I am “tumbling through the centuries” with you. A ghost, witnessing with no power to save. Your writing never disappoints, fantastic piece!
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Read MoreI went to France to eat bread, cheese, and wine. I carried everything I needed on my back, because I had no car. We took the train to Portsmouth, and walked to the ferry port. I took a tent, some...
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Excellent work. You bring this to life.
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Thanks, I wanted to post something a bit happier than my usual stuff. I am very glad you enjoyed it man.
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James
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Powerfully penned, Keith. There are dangers everywhere, clever write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian