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Read MoreI wish you would hear my emotions ascend and screamFrom the depths a stream of consciousness flowingLike a huge wall of sound swelling within a dreamMaybe then you could give this poem a title Like tidal waves slowly rising on...
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hi crim, hope you’re doing well. Thank you. Yes, it’s difficult to find a soul mate in today’s world, even though her and I went through different paths for a decade we found each other again. Hope you had a great Christmas and wishing you a happy new year.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian. Hope you’re doing well sir.
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Read MoreJust hear those lay bells jinglingRing-ting-tingling tooCome on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay together with you Outside the hoes are callinthey’ll be no blue ballin, "Yoo hoo"Come on, it's lovely weatherFor a lay ride together with you Get it up, get...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Only the Dr. Seuss of horror could take this Christmas classic and flip it on its head. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend.
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I was laughing so hard at this. Really good rendition Keith;))
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Appreciate that Fia. Hope you had a great holiday my friend..xo
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Oh what fun it is to ride!!! 😂😂😂
This is so funny and creative! Thank you very much for this wonderful Christmas gift, dear Keith!-
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Thank you Elke. Hope you had a great holiday my friend.xo
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A scorched-earth parody that weaponizes familiarity. The humor comes less from punchlines and more from how far it’s willing to push desecration of a cultural comfort song. Not subtle, but very intentional.
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Thanks Thomas.
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Read MoreShe likes it long in the backShe likes it short on the top and the sidesShe likes it back in blackShe wants to go for a mustache ride I am your mullet manYes I amGonna take you for a ride...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. It reads like lyrics my friend. Excellent write. “Do you know the mullet man? Who lives on dreary lane. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I sure do my friend. He lives across the street from me! Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreEveryday it's on repeatdrink your coffee move your feetTake your brain and then disposewhere it goes, nobody knowsJust keep movingjust keep workingDesperate systemmental prisonKeep on the tracksdo not look backJust keep working hoursthat devoursHopes we're dreamingit's deceivingThis is madnesscostumed...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write about the never-ending loop called everyday life my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate the feedback. Thank you
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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I love the warning you give in this. Giving them perfect opportunity to understand what will happen.
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hlello beautiful Fia I actually cringe when they do me dirty because even though I don’t wish it retribution is coming… thank you for feeling this vibe I kind of felt bad for writing it it’s usually keep to myself ❤️
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Dear B,
You said it! This one cuts right to the core. Some days I want to wear a tee shirt that says don’t test me. Just don’t.
I even liked the font. Like the write it’s direct and unapologetic. Great piece. H🌷-
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hello beautiful Honoria thank you graciously I kind of felt uncomfortable with this one I don’t know why… I’m happy it spoke to you ❤️
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hello dearest Wallly this poem says how I feel…I asked God today if there was any real love you know two people really loving each other…great write ❤️