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Read MoreLiving this Dream Ā Across arid airs and vast wastelandsLayered lairs, places - without care or cares. Tis there ā Where A hand picks up a pen Eyes, poetic wheels, beginning to spin Upon a poetic wheel:Giving it a Ā Spin. A battle on Ā The frontiers of self. To lose Ā Or Ā To...
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Read MoreHaving the burden of carrying the emotionHe goes through life always hiding the obvious truthThe lairs of his heart run as deep as any oceanLike centuries, ever since the days of his youthĀ He carries the messages of peace and...
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Thanks Damian. I’ve been trying to get back into a really writing rhythm and cycle.
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I didn’t say you were wrong, punk! The proper name is “Paint Horse”. I agreed! But there are some who call it painted horse too. So perhaps that’s a lesser name or something. I just go by what I research, I don’t judge.LOL.
You’re saying I’m wrong just to build the drama on a slow night.
Dont make me bring the BaBoom! on ya!
Anyway, lover, your write…
Wonderfully dreamlike, even if in day. That “zone” that we settle in, for creative moments. It’s addictive to want to stay there half a day!
You described it well. And my dear, we are immortal for as long as we are around! What a blessing! -
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I remember a certain dream you were telling me about today! Pillows were thrown! Hahaha
Yes, dreams can affect the awake state! I had to post!
And I am an avid dreamer honey. You know this too š
Thank you for the snaps on my write!But honey you love my drama! Haha
You are a great sparring partner. Itās kind of addicting.
Your wit and words, I love it and you:)
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yeah, that dream. And also our last baboom. LOL. Sigh!
Smooches!-
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Oh Lordy! Hahaha. Behave!!
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This is a good piece. If I can go to bed as well and just fall into a dreamlife. That would be great.
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Hi Fia!
Thank you. Iām so happy you enjoyed. Iāve always been curious about dreams. How our brains manage all of it while we are sleeping. Sometimes they feel so real and other times not so much. lol
Itās a great asset to be in tune with when it comes to writing. At least for me it is.
Thanks for stopping my Fia:). Iām not posting as much but Iām trying!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent write as usual my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi Damien!
Thank you so much. Iām so happy you enjoyed it!
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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We’re aware of painted horse and through family of riders riding them not just to battle, but to the here after and into the dream realm. Your guardian into and our of the dreamweaver or afterlife. Great pieces lady with lots of imagery, we could see this, tight
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Hey Meme!
I just felt like going there in this write. To kind of tap into the other side of sleeping. Dreams are fun. I donāt have many nightmares at all. Mostly weird stuff that makes me laugh when I wake up. Other times it is extraordinary and inspiring. I feel in order to be a writer we must dream. They go hand in hand.
Thanks for getting this write amigo. Glad you could see it.
Thatās the whole point of writing for me:)
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This is a fiesta of dreamlife that ascends into cloud realms of loving bliss. I just felt the total joy here that comes as you rest your head to sleep and dream. This is how the best dreams come and you expressed this with great virtuosity. Truly a fabulous poem.
John
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Some of my favorite poems come from dreams. Iāve learned to keep a spiral notebook next to me in case something
Really grabs me and I need to write it down. Dreams have a huge influence on my writing:)
Thanks for all the positive feedback on my writes amigo:)
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Read Moremy focus is off no fascination can I findeyes dim of their flickerthey speak to the lostit is unintentional but my eyes find theirsalchemy of meditation, my medication toxicmy lucidity questionable, I have withdrawnwith nothing to hold my attentionsit...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Powerful vibes…
Most excellent…
<#3
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thank you graciously dearest Cipher I truly appreciate your presence here ❤️
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Tremendous work Brenda. Always a pleasure to read your poems..xo
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Read MoreDomainWe get it in downloads and write in clockwork elves Clockwork machines manifested from clockwork selvesSo many Dali clocks on So many shelves. How we made &Make. Letters to break the fetters and make The soul: Shake. The Earth: Quake.Writing-ignitinginShake n bake, baked. I want...
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Iām digging the whole vibe/quake in this.
And I enjoyed the opening, the use of the work clockwork.
Like there are different gears that shift our writing – hence earthquake!
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Thank you Del…
Hoping to get back into the routine of writing…
Very much appreciated…
After I wrote this…
I was thinking about poetry and prose…
Rhyme and off rhyme…
Or like, in this piece, I feel this sort of
approach, with like…Internal rhyme and rhyme shifts…
Well I was just thinking how it effects
the senses…
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I’m digging the Dali within this. I can see the melting clock as I read this. Yet you’ve awakened that clock, for one last tock!
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Thank you Styx…
Very much appreciated…
Gotta love the Dali… š
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian