Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.

Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
j.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…

Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability

I wonder what exactly the reason for that is…
I think politically…and all those afraid to stand up against the King.
j.

There are so many ways to take this…I like when a statement makes you think.

It seems you are indeed write sir .. and for wot it might be worth, I’ve thinked the same thing myself .. & often .. Neville

Watching is good but being caught is better.
Terrific succinct and titillating piece.
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Terrific write

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we own our choices good or bad. And for those we regret, we can ask forgiveness and do what we can of good deeds to even up the ledger. Similar to what the Chorus in Oedipus spoke of at his end.
Fate took him in one direction…he attempted to take himself as far as he could in the other before his death.
Really good piece.
j.

I really appreciate an honest piece like this. The inner monologue was captivating. Thanks for sharing it.