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Adelphina wrote a new post
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Read MoreBury meBeneath Currents of Glass Underneath the overpass On your way out of town So you can take one last glance Then forget your past And don’t look back You left me here Beneath currents of glass...
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Fantastic!
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Hi Adagio
Thank you!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, this one has layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damien:)
Thank you. I wanted to try something different when I first wrote.
From the victim perspective. Giving her a voice.
I’m glad you enjoyed:)
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Truly engaging… tight lines… smooth rhyming
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Thank you!
Wanted to try something different and from a victim perspective.
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There’s two of you!? What!
No way, you’re as original as they come sweetheart!
I’ve always enjoyed reading your material, obviously. It was what reeled me in to begin with. This write of yours shows your diversity in themes and mood too. Not too dark, but plenty of shadowy imagery to compel the reader to peek.
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Hey babe,
Sometimes you write something and wonder if you should post. This was one of those writes. I posted it on
DUP a long time ago and heard about the whole Houston thing. It reminded me of this write so I put it back out in the writing universe. lol. Thanks for being my rock honey. You are priceless! -
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Well I identify as a rock, but we both know that I’m a stick. LOL
Smooch!
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Read MoreI'd prefer if she loved me a little less and lusted me a little more. Love is comforting and steady; lust raw and immediate,all fire and urgency .I don’t want only her devotion; I want her need, the hunger...
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Excellent thoughts on the physicality of intimacy. Well articulated. Great write.
John
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Thanks John appreciate your comment.
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I agree absolutely to you, Peter! Love is a holy union of body, mind and soul. All sides want and need to be addressed. Ideally, a relationship is based on intimacy, soul- and mindful conversations and wild and ecstatic sex. Great write, my friend!
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Thanks Elke for your thoughtful comment.
🙏
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Love requires too much. Lust is quick and easy and short term.
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I’ve never really nailed down just exactly what love is.It certainly isn’t the romantic version that most assume.
Lust, is only a bees dick away from one version of pure love…..there are no doubt many more.🙏
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Nice write, Pete. Vivid, lustful, very creative.
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Read Morecombelling darkness give me chillssinsiter slice cuts right through meerotic mayhem makes me lustmonsters of the horde recognizeI'm dancing on the peripherythey're watching intentlysilenc talks to mewhispering madness secrets to be kepta grey entered my sunshine long agomy vulnerability...
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So dark… loved it!
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thank you dearest Daniel I appreciate you ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Darkly penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreturn up the heat this is just getting gooda hex is upon my lipsa promise is spilling from my hipstwisted sorrow, a cunted cursesulking in the shadows never to beholdsacrifice sanity and get in the moodaltered faith in your...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously good evening ❤️
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Sinisterly penned, Brenda. A powerful dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian