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You are you and that is all that matters. Great poem.
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you sure do shine beautiful Jackie I leave out whole words my brain says are there you have my sympathy ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Amazing write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreRewriting Memory There was always a kind of sadness in your eyes Even when you were baby and looked at me There was always this emotive tone in your voice So young and yet so full of melancholy In those days there was an...
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Oh I love the fact you understand that he is on a journey of healing. Nice piece
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Thank you Fia.
Each poem for this year’s NaPoWriMo challenge was very much reflection and memory, especially with close relationships.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you very much Damian. This is one of those writes that’s close to me.
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Read MoreI wrote this poem with no AI interference at all, nope none of that. The only thing AI did was help me get my poem onto this picture. That’s it. Thank you
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The Queen is a dark bad ass. Like the lay out and the rhyme scheme.
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Hello there Fia 🙂 thanks for stopping and thank you for commenting. i’m glad you enjoyed this piece
Thank you❤️
Jackie
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Hello Honoria,what a treat to see you here.
Like I was telling Crim it took me all night to write this poem. I’m pretty happy with the outcome. Thanks for looking, sweetheart.
Miss you
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Hello Damian.
Always a pleasure to see you on my page. I appreciate you too thank you my friend.
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Hi there vision, thank you. It means a lot and thank you for reading it and commenting. Appreciate you.
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Thank you very much Abby appreciate you.
Jackie xx
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Read MoreShe moves around with cautionNever knowing when "they" may appearParanoia has been setting inShe knows there realEveryone is telling her there notShe'll witness "them" from the corner of her left eye"They" look like little children whisperingAt times they'll look...
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Okay you know I am a scardy cat but this is good.
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Appreciate it Fia. Thank You!!
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Thanks for reading PAR.
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Read MoreGreetings (Fill in the persons name here)!Now that I have your attentionHere's what I'm going to do to youI'm gonna slam my left fist into your rib cageYou lift your arms to give me easier access to your ribs...
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There are beathing and there is decimation. Damn..
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Bring on the decimation! Thanks Fia.
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This is good informative poem. My son has dyslexia and though it takes him a little longer to read things, it does not change who he is. I love when I can relate to a piece