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Read Moreinside I crash into your energysmashing, cunted brillianceshining danger I can't resistinfidelity of the soulmy honesty is invaded by your darknessit seeps into my sorrowyour marred imageit makes me flinch what you call goodmiserable truth I hate the feelingof...
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thank you graciously dearest Damian forgive my late response I find myself slipping of as of late ❤️
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Read MoreSleep is death.Waking, birth.Each night ends meeach dawn delivers a reborn unfinished body.But reborn into what?light?silence?or the same shitscraped with memory?At night when darkness leans inI do not pray.I bargain thatbefore my daily rebirththe monsters will crawl backto the...
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“before my daily rebirth” I dug that line because the rest we get (sometimes) refreshes us, although for some more than others, it’s likely the last time. It reminds me that I have to be thankful for every day I get and try to make the best of it.
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I turned 78 today, so I hear you loud and clear. Each night, one wonders if dawn, or something else, or nothing at all will come. We get one of them, but not our choice.
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Read MoreHome playing piano Making it beautiful Just for you In your favorite red dress Each heart beat key Bringing me closer for free Fingertip music notes Catching a ride Exhaled at midnight Melody blown kisses For only your ears Devoted to appear Millions of miles away Playing piano...
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Hola! I wondered when you’d share more of your talent! Seems life is good with you Amiga 🌼
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Dude!! I just finished my book. Every poem has an accompanied piece of art! It’s titled Poetry Stained Teeth!
It’s on Amazon!! But to get a printed copy you need to go to Book Baby. It’s who I went through to self publish!!
This is one page of my book! It’s what I’ve been working on all year. Phew. I’m starting my second one!Thanks for checking this out !!
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This is a beautiful take on playing the piano.
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Thanks Fia!
Especially for helping me with posting!
This is another older one from back in DUP days and kind of flirting with Mark. hahaha
It was before we decided to meet. He would always comment and kind of tip toe flirt!
Where I on the other hand was a bit more aggressive. LolThanks for the awesome comment!!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! You know how much I love poems that highlight music, excellent write my friend. The art compliments the write nicely. Great to see you posting again. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey there Damien.
Yes, I have a love for music poems too! I have a few more others I might post here.
Thank you for the snaps on my art! It came out just like I imagined it would. It’s been quite a year putting this together
I’m glad most of it is over. Now I need to try and market! I need pointers amigo!!! HahahaStay cool amigo!
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The pic reminds me of you, of course! Especially the long, beautiful hair! And, I can see you writing, if not playing the piano. Your words are music to my eyes.
This is a “not so secret anymore” wonderful love poem. And I am so frickin lucky to have found you. Your limitless awesome traits. You will always be beautiful, forever. And talented! -
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Hey honey. Thank you!! November can’t come soon enough.
I tried to sleep but I couldn’t so here I am. Hopefully I will tonight
I’ll call you in a bit. Need my coffee time with you!!I love this comment!!! You make me feel so beautiful:)
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i can just imagine you, looking at the picture… your delicate fingers dancing on the piano…n owww woow
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Hi Dimpy! I’m so happy to see you here.
Thank you for the comment:). That is me, my son took it and then I embellished everything else.
I have no idea how to play it but in my mind I’m a pro. HahaI’m glad you enjoyed!
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Yaay, i loved every word…nd i must say here both mom and son are talented…
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Hello Crims!
I like the old-timey vibe of this. I wish there was more along this type actually. It just seems to set a nice tone when reading. Like those before us perhaps. At any rate, this is a wonderful poem that you’ve presented for us.-
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hello dearest Styxian good evening I’m happy the language of this write spoke to you it was how it presented itself the poem I mean thank you so much for letting me know ❤️
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Hey crimson!
The last line is a dark but beautiful visual. It gives me a Celtic vibe.
It starts off with wonderful bits of love then changes tone.
I love the word pairing of sweeping crimson. It’s like a red wave of devotion.Love your stuff chica:)
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hello beautiful Adelphina good morning thank you graciously for such a lovely comment❤️
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hello lovely poetess thank you graciously ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously my friend ❤️
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Read MoreLook, folks, nobody knows hyperbole better than me—believe me. People are always telling me, “Sir, you’re the greatest ever. In history. Maybe ever.” And it’s true! I know words, I have the best words. Some people might even say...
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Oh, it is all so true! In some universe somewhere inside his head, maybe. I think the people in there will deal with him in a very harsh way. Can’t you see the signs? He is slipping away — just not fast enough.
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Love the depth and layers in this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian