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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Thank you
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Read MoreSO YOU WANT MORE? (This is a sequel/part two to both...BODY PAINT TIME and THE NEW TENANT). I bring together my agoraphobic neighbor Mags (Body Paint Time) and Jaz (The New Tenant) - Enjoy the sex! -------- The day after Jaz moved...
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Read MoreThe New TenantThe tiny ebony chick was new to my building. Most tenants fall into 3 categories: sex offender, addict or mental case. I cross categories. I'm an addicted, sex addict and a nutcase!I could tell she had issues. I...
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Can I borrow your bandana?
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Read MoreBODY PAINT TIMEI visited with my quirky friend Mags at her apartment in the same building as mine. A floor and a hallway away. She has more issues than me.Around the corner and up a flight of stairs. 4 flights. I'm...
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Read MoreAmityville, Long Island, New York, 1974Family thrills, Sinister home,Evil lurks below Restless demon, Restless night,As it is written, Dishonor thy fatherChaos increased, Red dragon speaksThe possession is driven to murder Angry father, Worried mother,Son and daughter The repressed, The confusedThe obsessed, The...
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I do not remember when I found out Amityville was in Long Island New York. But the first thing I thought of was the house created on top of a burial ground. That movie I’ve had seen twice
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My parents, like many heard about the Lutz family leaving their house and went to the property to possibly witness or see any strange occurrences. This was December 1975. They saw nothing. The family left the home completely furnished, as though they went out to the movies or something. The story made the headlines that the home was haunted. George Lutz spoke to a writer named Jay Anson. Anson recorded about 45 hours worth of material from George & Kathy Lutz. This was used for the basis of the book and eventually a movie.
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Thank you Mary. I appreciate that.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, this is a fucking classic piece of film. James Brolin was a wood chopping son of a bitch in this flick. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh so true my friend. Classic film! Thanks for the feedback.
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Something about haunted houses always gives me pause. Mainly because it’s supposed to be
be the one place you should feel protected from the outside world. Something about the Amityville movies always made me think of my grandmother.
I’m not sure how it all started but my grandmother has this thing about blessing her families vehicles and houses. Not a priest but just her and her Spanish prayers. She has long passes away but my mom kept the tradition going and always gives me a blessed rosary to hang on my cars rear view mirror. When I was younger I would roll my eyes but now that I’m older not so much. I don’t mean to ramble on but this took me back! Total classic!-
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Cool story Adelphina. Thanks for sharing about your grandmother.
I think the Amityville movies create a sense of uneasiness because theirs something sinister about the look of the house. If you go pass the house today, there aren’t any characteristics that will take you back to those haunting images during the 70’s, 80’s and 90’s.
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More