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Read MoreMy father died two years ago. It's hard to say exactly, although the moment of his death was definitely there. However, the definition of this moment has always raised questions. At first, death was associated with a simple respiratory...
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Thank you very much. I’m glad my story has interested you 🙂
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Read MoreAnother spirt in a quagmire Selling off dignity just to get by Inflated egos that conspire Adding layers to a perpetual lie Sycophants always fall in line Empty vessels lacking a spine This world so full of sorrow Throwing obstacles in the way All I’m asking of...
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It is a bit musical. I wish for a better day, each and every day. That deer lost in headlights is so true
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A lot of us do wish for better days, that’s for sure. It has a musical feel is on point, it pretty much demanded to be that way, I just followed along for the ride. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I agree.
Thank you for putting it into words so eloquently.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Got my foot tapping away from the off to the end and back again .. Nice one too sir . Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does have a bit of a rhythm. Thank you for your continued support kind sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how this feels angry and tenderly thought at the same time. I like that hopefulness in the dark
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian the fire in the eyes of those zealous followers of the pied piper elevated to guru status is painted in your poem with fire and smoke. Truly a smoking great poem that is as strong emotionally as it is rhythmically. You have real talent my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really loved the way you described the write in your eyes my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I don’t think I’ve seen subterfuge used in poetry before and you made it fit and feel perfect.
I think many of us are feeling the same way, especially with the way the world is going.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like using odd words or hardly used words from time to time. When I can make them fit of course. lol. The world is very fragile at the moment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is an interesting conversation between the two (father and daughter). the opening about how the body reacts even though it is deceased is and interesting opening.