I didn’t expect it to go that way! I am not into short stories but that was steamy and rejuvenating. Well done, DampKitten!

Highly imaginative, Lady
Full of suspense sexuality and devotion.
It’s been a while since I have read story telling this good
Reminds me of the old erotica short stories I used to
read when I was younger

Great job DK

Naaj

Indie, thank you so much for reading and your specific recommendations. I’m sure you realize that the name, Charlie, was specifically chosen to surprise the reader in the way you mentioned – still, I like your idea to make it more obvious when the curtain finally rises on her identity. I’ll check on the parking lot as well.

Thank you, HJ! I’m glad you liked it!

Powerful work. Hot. Well crafted and steamy.

Beautifully penned, DK. A steamy erotic write, with fabulous storytelling, and an incredible imagination my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Brilliantly written. Well executed. Sex, sex and more sex. This is some hot motherfucking shit!

Never cease to impress. Always well written and deep (pun intended) lol. The story flows smoothly and hott hott hott 🔥 😋

I keep missing the reply button!
I love your comments as always, HJ

So are you, girl, and thank you! No apologies for tears, but kisses for cleanup!

xoxo

You’re getting good at this😉

A beautiful description of the transition to the afterlife. I’ve got chills, morbidly beautiful. I’ve enjoyed this, well done D.K xx
~P.G💋

The last stanza, I got the chills. Nice. Xoxo

Sheesh! This gave me Bram’s Dracula vibes! Excellent!

oh Peter… you haven’t seen anything yet… this woman is a witch…

The whole piece is fantastic 👏 and the last stanza is remarkable poetry! Bravo!

Dark. My bed sheets will be over my head tonight after reading this. Nice!

Oh stop, Mr. Dragon! Your poetry is amazing… publication worthy. You have incredible depth and vision. I always love you insight on my stuff! Thank you!

xoxo

Damn girl, you’re good with metaphor. Love that last stanza, it’s killer..

You’re welcome. It was an enjoyable read!

The description and detail of a female orgasm is beautiful and dirty at the same time. This is one amazing write P.G. Explosive and cataclysmic!

Amazing and Brilliant metaphorical magnificence! BRAVO! Absolutely stunning piece! I am totally in awe. A seductive masterpiece! Wow! Wow! Wow!

I couldn’t read it without ET song playing in my head. Lol
Galactic pleasures are always the best!
But for his own sake, he must keep his fingers away from the black hole.

Beautifully penned, P.G. Into the book it belongs! This is passionately written my friend. Love the flow between classic erotica & almost completely diving into the more dirty stuff. It’s well balanced, a great read. Appreciate you.

Damian

Huge fan of metaphysical erotica.
Keep it goin’ PG!!

Naaj

HJ, it is an honor. Thank you xx
~P.G💋

I liked this. Now I’m seeing stars 🌟 haha

I read your short stories like a quick fix for some watching a disturbing movie or reading a depressing novel. Am I alright?

Wow, I need a Valium. That was hugely disturbing.

Vision, I can always look forward to you doing my head in. xx
~P.G💋

Disturbingly penned, Keith. This was quite dark my friend, but you always deliver a great read. Appreciate you.

Damian