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Average Joe started the topic Memorial Day in the forum Underground Caverns
“If Your Reading This” by Tim McGraw
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Read MoreI'm a lover of progressive and psychedelic rock... I like the harmony injected ...
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Obrigado, Damian. ❤
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Groovy piece my friend. Lets a take a trip on a magic ocean. Everything will be real fine. Peace to you my dear friend.
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Obrigado, Keith. ❤
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Obrigado! ❤
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Read MoreSome say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...
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Superb
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
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Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
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You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
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Thank you, Wil;))l
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Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Heavy! Like this a lot.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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Read MoreThe boy was raped by his mother's father at 8, 11 & 12 years oldShe was raped by her father & uncle at 6, 9, 11 & 14 years oldA year ago, the boy's father left home for another...
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Tragic. He obviously needed help
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Yup. Sadly it was too late. Thanks Fia.
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Brutal and powerful work.
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Thanks Thomas
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I can barely keep up with all this incest, Keith. This is worse than General Hospital. Where do you dream this stuff up? I’m standing on a ledge after reading it.
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HAHA! General Hospital SUCKS! I don’t know. I’m fucked in the head i guess. Don’t jump. I have more for you to read. xo
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Beautifully penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! You know I love poems that have talk of music in them. Great write my friend. Love the layout and the creativity, nice execution on the difficulty. Appreciate you.
Damian