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Read MoreSpent so many years finding a reason Constant friction rubs against the grain With hope comes a change of season Suspicion stirs beneath a summer rain Thought I caught lightning in a bottle Forgotten words splinter through space Ancient spirts following at full throttle Falling out...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite lines as well, though I had other lines I liked as well. You’re spot on as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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tREMENDOUS WORK.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Coming to a dark truth is scary after a long search isn’t it?
Favorite line: Distractions occupy the symbol minded-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is quite scary, it definitely woke me up. lol. I loved that line as well, one of my favorites. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved that line as well. There were quite a few I loved in here. Appreciate you.
Damian
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G’mornin’, Damian 🌤
The enjoyment of your fine writes goes well with this hot wake up mug-a lapsang souchong.Such a beautifully rendered, smoothly flowing set of unmetered Quatrains (in a-b-a-b spot-on rhymes) sing a sad song, indeed.
They say, “We must play the cards we’re dealt!” But, I, as You, have obviously been dealt some tragically sorry hands.
The one worst aspect of romantic relationships your keenly-writ lines bring to mind, is the painful reality of unrequited feelings and emotions.“Understand I’m living the fucking song
And your loyalty lies in remaining numb”Brilliant work, Syr Poet … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Rascal🖌
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Rascal. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Terrible hands indeed, and I didn’t do much in my early life to help matters. Like becoming an alcoholic, just lead me farther off the path. This one has layers, on one hand there is nothing wrong with a romantic relationship poem, so I don’t mind it being viewed as such. But this one is more about a songwriting partner/friend who I loved like a brother. He was family, until that was no longer possible. They kinda overlap. lol. Thank you for your wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for clearing the relationship … just read again and it makes perfect sense.
Been there, done that!
A thought: Ya might consider saying what you did to me in the Summary for others to enjoy this piece all the more.
Thanks, Damian, for your appreciation! ⁓ RJ
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Read MoreWhy sit in the shadow When the light is warm and welcomingWhy stay silentWhen the noise is resounding and beckoningWhy be with a fewWhen there is many up for the joiningWhy pick youWhen there are other volunteeringThe whys do not...
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hello lovely Fia this is beautiful in its acceptance of this person behind the veil 💕
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Thank you, crimsin;))
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Hoi hoi
As long as you remember my nameI will always be content with just being.
Ahhhh…., the beauty of simplicity!
The cherry on the cake!
Thank you!
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Thank you, Duhsjaak❣️
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! What can I say? This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian ❣️
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The one before the few or the many. Individuals, in the knowing, are complexities. Well worth the read 🌼
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Thank you, Joe ❣️
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The pleasure was mine 🌼
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I don’t need anybody to remember my name, myself. As long as my words reached something in them in recognition. I’m happy to let others have the limelight 😊
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Willow i will remember your words your unforgettable . Thank you ❣️
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Fantastic.
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Thank you, Thomas
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Your words display your humanity and some vulnerability. Yet, there’s also a warm heart behind all that beating.
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Hi Tim and thank you for the comment.;))
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Thank you, Hamid ❣️
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Thank you, Adira ❤️
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hello lovely Fia a very fiery passion powerful 💕
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Thank you crimsin ❣️
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Oh damn…
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Thank you, Willow❣️
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Passionately penned, Fia. This write is fire my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I need to get this fire started somehow. Lol
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I do this to women …
Then they burn for me
Wait
Listen
I may be at your door ….-
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Ohh, waiting.
Big like
Thank you PoetSpeak ❣️
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The flames of that passionate fire are rising high in this one, Fia. Nice one.
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Thank you, Tim had to bring a little fire❣️
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Do you see me leaning in? This poem has made me a voyeur. Very nice, Fia, love it.
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Thank you Kay-1😊
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There are so many great lines in this one. I think the one that sticks the strongest with me is:
“Complacency is a recipe for disaster”
Not paying enough attention to the gravity of a situation is so dangerous. All it takes is a single grain to tip the scales. Gotta watch the build-up. Your mind never ceases to amaze me, my friend