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Read MoreI would be telling you a lie if I stated that I did not need a night out with my friends. Work is the usual hectic mess that it is. The peace and serenity I crave at home have...
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Thank you crimsin. That is so kind of you to say. I hope you like the rest of the story.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Amazing write, you’re a fantastic storyteller my friend. Dig this, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you;)) cuz
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very nice. lookin forward to next part.
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Thank you Ambjr;))
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Read MoreReturning on a jet plane... (Paul Harvey used to give "...the rest of the story" on the radio. The same radio played songs that gave us a glimpse into song character's lives but are never revisited! Even worse when the...
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This is good. I never thought of it needing a return trip. Enjoyed this
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Read MoreBloodshot skies acting like a backdrop Trees sway amongst a whispering wind Redemption glows within the moonlight While destruction lies around the bend Seductive rivers carry manipulated beasts Who bring war to those considered different Hatred fuels these sinful calloused hearts By using influence to seduce...
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I guess we all have our interpretations. I see a line of young people heading into a club or hanging out outside it to hear hip hop or rap. Many may disagree, but I see that kind of music as negative and detrimental. Just my two cents.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. To me every kind of music or creative outlet has its negative sides, as well as its positives. Nothing in this world is exempt from good and evil. That’s just my two cents, for what they’re worth. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous flow here, my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian either they don’t read the situations or they are goading up to reveal what we know… through manipulation of a situation…they get me all the time this is one of your best in my opinion 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I couldn’t agree with you more, the truth will hopefully be revealed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved those lines as well, you’re right there is no such thing as a safe place in the world’s current state. Happy to read your commentary again, hope your music projects are going well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“While destruction lies around the bend”
It’s interesting how the word lies changes the entire tone when read as one definition over the other. This is such a cleverly written piece. And powerful, as you excel at, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Loved that line as well. It is interesting how it changes the tone, I love the little things like that about writing, seems you do too. Nice to know I got company! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fanfuckingtastic Damian. Powerful and packs a tremendous punch!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I do what I can. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I kinda get an image of friends drifting apart maybe due to political differences.
Great ink, friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see that, and that’s why I love poetry, every interpretation is open to the reader. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI didn’t love you. I loved the idea of you. And I rewrote you into my story the way I wanted.
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How often do we project our ideal images or personalities into someone we have a crush on, or admire? I know growing up I did it a lot. I made my female crushes into someone that didn’t exist. It’s often through heartbreak, or age, or wisdom, we learn.
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Even though this is short, it holds so much truth to it.
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Powerful work. I relate.
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10/10🙏
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Yes, I know exactly what you mean. But one day I discovered how thrilling and satisfying it is to show one another the raw and naked self in all our greatness and flaws!
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Read MoreYou only saw power as taking Taking control Claiming opinions, trust, positions, respect Subsuming individuals into the collective you until we all talked the same, and walked the same, and thought the same. But Sir power is not taking it may only be received So you may take what you think you want from me I can always...
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hello lovely Fia good evening you are an excellent story teller this is sexy and fun while being thrilling too 💕