Ornithophile

Honoria
8 months ago

Dear D,

You still got it. An incredible meter. Made me want to sing this. The imagery played in my head of a dark bus stop. Why? No clue. But the players in this piece for me, were intertwined. Trying to run but wanting to stay. I have a longer version running in my head but I’ll spare you the directors cut😊
Wonderful write. H🌷
- Damian DeadLove
  8 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I sometimes have that effect, it’s just the lyricist in me. lol. I always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Nick DC
8 months ago

Haha great end there, friend.
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked it as well. lol. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Willow
8 months ago

Just reading Honoria’s comment above & I think she’s right. This one might need to be considered for your lyrics list on the album. It has a cadence that moves & the visual is captivating. Worth considering, my friend? 🤔
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Anything is on the table, maybe even spoken word. Never say never. The song I’m working on, I literally had to start writing lyrics to it. None of the old words were fitting the vibe. Also, I haven’t tried to write a song for many summers now. I kinda forgot sometimes the music leads the dance. lol. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Fia Naturie
8 months ago

I remember this piece. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoy it now. Nice Damian.;))
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool! Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Crimsin
8 months ago

hello dearest Damian I feel you I’m in love but the need for another hit outweighs romance great write 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Thomas W. Case
7 months, 4 weeks ago

Tremendous
- Damian DeadLove
  7 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Neville
5 months, 3 weeks ago

Something tells me this is so good .. I got a foot that can’t stop tapping .. 😎👍
- Damian DeadLove
  5 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

Crimsin
8 months ago

this makes me think of metaphors for getting with someone romatically and going to the flea market and haggling for the write price haggling with a whore sorry Fia it’s the images your challenge brought 💕
- Fia Naturie
  8 months ago
  
  It’s fine. Go for it and write crimsin
  - Backdeckbenny (Peter)
    8 months ago
    
    I cast desire upon the tide,
    My fingers tremble for her weight
    A secret urge I cannot hide,
    My bait a promise, sweet as fate.
    
    She rises shimmering, bare and bold,
    Her flanks and curve inflame the air
    Enticing as forbidden gold,
    She stirs my blood with fevered dare.
    
    She fights, resists, with sultry grace,
    Her finish slick against my skin;
    The pull, the yield, our swift embrace
    She swallows lust, I drink her in.
    
    On shore, still dripping wet with lust,
    Her form revealed, full-bodied, wild
    We meet as lovers, freed and flushed
    My catch, my craving, reconciled
    - Fia Naturie
      8 months ago
      
      Oh wow, Peter that was good
      Thank you for participating

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