PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)

Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Mistaken Tears (N.E. Challenge)

Poetry, Uncategorized

May 25, 2025

13

Some say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...

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11 Comments
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Superb
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas 😊
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
    - DampKitten
      1 year, 4 months ago
      
      You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Wil;))l
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian 😊
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thank you, Keith 😊
- Poemstar
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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• 1 year, 4 months ago

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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Ashes to energy (N.E Challenge)

Poetry

May 25, 2025

4

Your body died but that wasn't youhow could it beyou're not even dust nowjust energy returned to the umiverse.Existing only in the mindsof those left behind.Dependent soley on perceptions of you when you lived.But who was it that lived?The body you inhabited did...

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3 Comments
- S. Libellule
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Love this… great job… excellent flow… great authenticity…
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  We are more than our physical bodies.
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  There’s something very “Dr. Spock” about this. Logical. Pure Energy.
  That’s some deep thinking, Peter. I’m heading into orbit.
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

grief

Poetry, Uncategorized

May 25, 2025

7

find your way among the stars my sonyour sweet voice still lingersMa don't be sad...wept tears and those I keeponly God seesverses pent up with the ocean I need to releasefeeling deeply despite my numbing agentit feels like breathingsobriety...

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5 Comments
- Willow
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Brenda, this absolutely breaks the heart. I am sending you so much love & the biggest hug
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    hello beautiful Willow thank you hugs back I will be alright I can’t help but write what I feel and everyday my mind is retracing it’a steps to the days we had together and how we got here ❤️
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Powerful work. Heartbreaking.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    hello dearest Thomas thank you for the love on this write ❤️
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Heartbreaking write, Brenda. This is powerfully penned my friend. Sending prayers and positive energy your way. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Shadow Of Doubt

Poetry

May 25, 2025

14

Biased figures manipulate opportunities Power has reigned since the dawn of time Spitting rhetoric laced with dry ambiguities False sincerity acted out in full pantomime Dreams are aborted before even catching breath Harsh reality of being worked and taxed to death Programmed from a young...

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13 Comments
- S. Libellule
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Love this… great job Damion…
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- inechoingsilence
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  This post, at first blush, leaves me with what to disagree with. After a second read, and seeing the layers underneath, it is powerful and insists that one consider it on the deeper level. Many thanks and blessings. <3 Echo
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Echo. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Fist in the air, I’m over here going “Yeah! And…yeah!” All the way through this one. I remember this one & I’m glad she followed you over. Some truths should never fade into darkness. Favorite line:
  
  Only way to quit the lie is to go cold turkey
  
  That is gold, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved that line as well. It ranks high as one of my best in my opinion. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Raw and gritty. Love it.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- DampKitten
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Totally agree…
  We got a shitstorm of rhetoric and meaningless ambiguity to wade through. I remember the term “Double Speak” from Orwell’s 1984. So legitimate. The dude had the future pegged.
  
  What we need round here is another Nostradamus and some hymnals.
  
  Great write
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He did get some of it spot on, indeed. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Poemstar
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Love your raw writing man ❤️‍🔥
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Poe. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
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