PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)

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September 16, 2025

In the grip of winterImpending dreadThe opposing army seized their homeFought them hard and with honorCritical madness All of his family slaughteredDisemboweledStillborn removedTorchedCharred remains He was the last survivorBarely endured the massacreRidden with diseaseSevered survivalGasping for airOn life support A vacant coffin...

8 Comments

Fia Naturie
11 months ago

Wow, I felt this. Very powerful write.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  11 months ago
  
  Thanks Fia. Appreciate it.
Jacob erin-cilberto
11 months ago

No one every really wins at war. It is just useless devastation and loss of lives.
This is an impressive portrait showing that.
And no one really survives. Even the survivors suffer so much mental and emotional loss.
j.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  11 months ago
  
  Absolutely. The only winners are the governments of the world. Thanks Jacob.
Damian DeadLove
11 months ago

Powerfully penned, Keith. The casualties of war extend farther than those who gave their life, others are scarred physically and mentally for the rest of their existence. With Governments that discard them, after they’ve been broken by war. Sad but true my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  11 months ago
  
  No one comes out unharmed. It’s a shame we here about so much of it time & time again. No matter what part of the world or decade, war rears it’s ugly head. Thanks my friend.
Thomas W. Case
10 months, 4 weeks ago

Tremendous work. RiGHT ON MAN.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thank you Thomas for the awesome feedback!

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