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Read MoreYellow Atrocity Screams In the depth of night,when all is silent,I can hear you scream.It’s a blood screamnot from a dream butthe reality of human atrocity.This sound is yellow,the shade often seen hiding in shadow,or imagined while listeningto a morose...
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Hi Curt. I know I left a review for this poem on WC, but the message is so important, I’m glad you shared it here too.
The imagery on this piece is haunting- The yellow scream is so vivid, almost synesthetic image that makes human atrocity feel terrifyingly alive.
The way sound, color, and darkness intertwine lingers long after reading.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group News and Suggestions
🌟 Hello and welcome to another edition of Stars Rite News!
I’m your host, Fia Naturie, and I have a few exciting updates to share with you today.
✨ Sign-Up Update
We recently had a little hiccup with the sign-up process, but the good news is—it’s all fixed! 🎉 You should now be receiving your password and sign-in details by email. If you d…Read More![]()
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Read More🌟 Hello and welcome to another edition of Stars Rite News!I’m your host, Fia Naturie, and I have a few exciting updates to share with you today.✨ Sign-Up UpdateWe recently had a little hiccup with the sign-up process, but...
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Informative info Fia. Thanks for all you do & the updates here.
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Thank you for saying that;))<3
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For such a new site, y’all are doing a kick-ass job of making it a solid place for writers.
Personally, anyone posting four pieces in a day is a lot. I’d like to see more faces posting in a day, than one face posting a lot in a day. Yaknow? It gets overcrowded quickly… But, eh, I’m just a user here. LOL -
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I don’t know if I may make a suggestion here, but ….
Is there a way to decrease the size of the header pics above a write, on the main page? If they were smaller, more of the recent authors/writes would show, which makes it easier to spot our favs, etc. As it is, it’s so labor intensive to keep hitting next, just to see a few writes as we scroll. Lesser size would add back more author visibilty on the main page.
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Hi, I will look into this. If you want to just see your friends work. Go to the top of the page and click on friends, and only their work will be shown.
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No, because we make new friends by seeing their writings! 🙂
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Thanks for the news update, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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You’re welcome, Damian
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Read MoreThe Rent Whips my back Leaving deep scars The Rent Keeps me from sleep It keeps me from sleep The Rent Binds my dreams The Rent Binds my thoughts Snuffs my desire Dousing my fire The Rent Wrecks my mind My mind is all I have And I'm going insane My mind is all I...
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Thank you for sharing this. A very direct and insightful poem, I really appreciate the “whipping” euphemism for rent. Hit the nail on the head!
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Thanks for reading.
I feel we over pay for every breath you take.
Regards James
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Over pay is right. You exemplify that very well in this piece.
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Oh my goodness, I really like how intense that reading is. I agree that the rent is too high
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Yes, the rent of living is high. Every thing is rented. The air, the time, the moments of our lives, every second is paid for. And it goes up every day.
Thanks for reading and listening
Regards James
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hello dearest James I know the feeling this is wonderful I feel the pain of it ❤️
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Every moment costs money and it just rises and rises. I feel it. I see what it does to people.
It cost a lot to exist.Thanks for reading
Regards James
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The darkness has a power of its own at times. Especially when one is alone and thinking of someone that sets them on fire with lust. This is one of those dark writes, but an alluring one to. Well done, crimsin. 🙂
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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously for your insight on this write it’s deeply appreciated ❤️
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Your poetry lives deep within my heart forever. Even if I don’t get a chance to read your work for a few weeks, your words and poetry always amaze me. xo
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hello dearest Keith I’ve missed you… you do me great honor with your thoughts thank you my friend…I deeply appreciate the love you show me the affection is returned ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian you move me with your thoughts ❤️
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This is so empowering. We need to stop this.