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good evening dearest Keith thank you graciously ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. This one tugs at the heartstrings my friend. I can feel the hurt in your words. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously for feeling me on this ❤️
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With lost things can never be the same, but you can still move forward. Sad piece Lady
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hello dearest Me I always appreciate when you visit me thank you ❤️
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Read MorePoetry wasn’t a choice.It showed up at my doorlike a small, rabid animalI needed to nurture. Like a scar,like my eye color. Before book sales,before applause,before anyone gave a damn. I was jaded by color.Sunsets weren’t cute.They were edible —pink and orange,soul...
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The last stanza is brilliant. Love it and the poem. Great work!
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Thank you.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Preach my brother, preach! You nailed this out of the park. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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Awesome.
Indeed, it’s that little angel/demon upon our shoulder, compelling us to write something, anything, to relieve the pressure of wanting to say something to the void. Life?Love?Pain?Loss? All of it.
Your write is terrific. I think we all write “for ourselves”. yet to have someone acknowledge our words does mean a lot. It makes us feel like it does matter, after all.-
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Thank you. I agree…it is nice when someone acknowleges us.
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Excellent ink & Not a single drop wasted .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, my friend.
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Yep. That’s just the way it is. We create because that’s how we deal with the world.
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so true.
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That last stanza…is everything. It’s never about accolades. It’s because we must. Damn…
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So true.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. You paint this scene well.
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dark, delectable, demonic, dirtily dished-out-damnation of the damsel’s sexual soul – I loved it, Crimsin! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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hello lovely poetess I absolutely loved your review of this poem ❤️thank you graciously…
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you’re welcome, Crimsin – I was only describing how it felt as your avid reader!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThey would both pretend at night during sex that they were having an orgasmFor her it's real easyShe could just say that she's cumming, make some noise and that's thatFor him, when he said he was gonna cum, he'd...
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well they each found someone they cared for perhaps not enough to count on maybe they counted on each other that is enough great write ❤️
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Thank you Brenda xo
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You’ve always had the knack of making me utterly mind boggled Keith. It truly is a gift lol.. loved it! xx
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this. Appreciate it..xo
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Some orgasmic happy ending! Great little love tale, Visions – Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Hello hj. Appreciate the feedback & read. Thanks!!
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You’re welcome! I enjoyed you!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
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Great work. You nailed it.
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Appreciate that Thomas. Thanks!
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Tragic, painful, sadness. This poem has so much hurt but brilliantly written Brenda. Great!