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Read MoreI. I lent wings to the boy-angel, or something like wings and he tried to fly, or something close to it, or maybe fly later, but the sky kept freezing, freezing, and he kept saying “I’m going up, going down, resending,” like a clause...
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I’ve being trying my best lately, thank you for the read and comments.
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Cleverly penned, PAR. This piece is brilliantly written my friend. Truly amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Brother, thank you for the read and comments.
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This piece has become liturgically and surgically well-constructed.
I don’t believe in angels, but they do exist. Thank you all. -
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PAR you are a great writer. Always pushing the envelope with your poetry. Nice work.
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You’re the best, Keith!
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I loved how quirky this is. I kept wondering where the next passage would go.
And it does have a comic newborn superhero feel to it with all the attempts at flying.
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Thank you a lot, poets know all the attempts at flying.
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Read More(4 verses) You and your immaculate persona, veiled by a silence that no one complains about, a worn-out icon of impossible purity, still sharp as antique glass. (6 verses) You and the witch that inhabits your heart, cold as fire that doesn't touch the skin, a wound...
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wow dearest Par this is deep those damn witchy entities never sure of their purpose grear write ❤️
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For sure never sure of their purpose… Witches.
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. This is a truly amazing write my friend, always love the depth of your work brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love you, my friend!
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So many awesome lines, wrapped together into a solid poem. It is truly art, Paulo. Your writes are always intriguing to me.
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thanks, my dear friend.
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Read MoreThere was a silent wind watching you, and I walked slowly to kiss you. There was a desire happening in the air, as if time were sweetly coming to touch you. There was a growing glow in the background, and I saw, deeply, your...
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A kiss can open up so much in someone’s life. We use it to show love, to heal, to appreciate ones actions, to say hello and to say goodbye. The feeling one gets from a kiss can be life changing, even if it’s just for a moment. More kissing, less violence. Great poem PAR.
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Much more kissing my friend. I big one to you!
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Passionately penned, PAR. A kiss can reveal many hidden details my friend. Excellent write per usual brother, you’re one of a kind.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A kiss to you, my friend!
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Lovely Par, the Kiss you wrote about is so intimate.
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A gigantic kiss to you my dear.
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Beautiful words PAR.
You weave a great image of love here
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Thank you, James.
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Read MoreI Beneath the eclipsed veil, she tears through time, a serpent that sings with a flower's mouth. Her stamens shine like unspoken names, and each petal is a cycle that unravels. II Spin, flower, in a spiral of ice, your body is a seal, your tongue...
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. This is beautifully penned my friend. Amazing storytelling as always, great read. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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😊❤️🌻
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Awesome. Not everything can be labelled poetry, as we all write our version of it. This definitely is poetry. It is full of great imagery for the reader to feast on. You write such strong, sturdy material. An educated writer through reading and being inspired, I percieve. You got it going on Paulo.
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Thank you for the gaze that reads me whole, for naming poetry where I only sowed a pulse. If my images fed you, it’s because your eyes were hungry. We write each other, always for your words now strengthen mine. Big hug!
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amen my brother
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Your writings PAR always shine ever so bright! Perfect
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Honored! PAR glows brighter when witnessed.
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Read MoreI At the first breath, the rock split its side for me,and the world fell quiet to hear my stride,for every gesture traced a pale decree,and every trace a pact with the void outside. II I descended through veins where...
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Epically penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! This is a masterpiece of a write with excellent storytelling my friend. I throughly enjoyed this one my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Postmodern poetry is taking it all over me. I am glad that you appreciate it. Hugs my brother.
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This is some stellar writing PAR. Great flow, with some awesome storytelling.
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Thank you Keith, big hugs my friend!
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You know this is quasi-brilliant. It’s like an updated bible of sorts. Not so much religious as it is of the human conditioning of limitations. Truly an outstanding piece of writing.