Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)

I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.

I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..

All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.

I love the this. This had me swaying and relating to the words. I agree keep these coming.

Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics as always my friend. Your flow and wordplay are simply amazing. Love the reggae vibe it accompanied your words smoothly. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much Gus! 🙏

It does feel awful to kill a living animal but they are dangerous and they steal food. I hope your okay.

Thanks Fia for reading.
I really just wanted it to leave but rats arent inclined to do that.Im ok with it now but I still wasn’t thrilled about killing it.
🙏

To find love but the old face is stuck in stasis of despair and anger. Nice one

Summarize me again, please, my friend!

If Hatred was a person it will hate this Haiku poem.
Well written bro! “)

The promising and positive title” sunny days ” creates an interesting contrast to the harsh and brutally realistic content of the poem. Very well written, dear Keith! xox