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Read MoreI refuse to be sweet To have my entire personality Boiled down to That chemical taste on your tongue I am not a seasoning To be lightly sprinkled in a conversation The salt that complements The meat in a...
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This is very good indeed 😘
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Bring the heat! Mild is overrated
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Powerfully penned, Green. This is an amazing write my friend, excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well?!Welcome!
And this is the first and powerful first write of your I read. And already beginning to love it a lot!
Looking forward to the next…..
Kind regards, Gus
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Read MoreI watch the palm trees In the storm As the wind whips themBack and forth They're jerked at all angles But never break They just snap back up And stand up straightI wish that I could Be like those trees So...Unbreakable
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I too wish I could be as unbreakable and resilient at times. Life is hard and it tries to break us sometimes. Keeping those palm trees in mind might remind us to be strong.
Nice one Green (Relic)
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Why not be that. Yes bend but never break. Love the meaning ❤️
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I’d like to be any tree.
In my mind humans are just highly evolved trees anyway.
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The resilience in trees is mind blowing. And so inspiring. Flexible but unbreakable…yeah, I wanna be like that too
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Its the droughts and storms and unlooked for prunings that give trees their strength. People too. 🌼
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Powerfully penned, Green. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWhen it comes to exercise, I love to walk. I've developed a routine that I do every day, and Ridgecrest Road, near where I live, is the perfect place to do it. It's quiet, and the scenic beauty is...
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This is good. Why would it be the only story you write ?
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I actually have another that’s more involved and longer but I’m not a confident story-teller. I was told of my lack of writing skills by an author. Thanks for the comment, Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. I wouldn’t give up on storytelling my friend, this is a really good story. I liked this a lot, If I’m ever in the neighborhood, we’ll take a walk. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate the comment, Damian. Thanks.
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Powerful work. Great storytelling.
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Thank you, Thomas.
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Don’t listen to nay sayers Tim
I did that with my art stuff
Listened to the wrong people tell me my stuff wasn’t any good
Then I stopped listening and said to myself
I’m doing this for me
Fuck everyone elseKeep writing stories Tim
BIG LIKE
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I appreciate your comment, PS. Thank you.
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I enjoyed this. I grew up with trains and hobos, so the subject is something I find very interesting. You say you’ve just started writing short stories and in my book, you’re off to a bang up start. Also, your writing is lean and correct–just the way it should be.
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Thanks so much for your comment and welcome to the site, Sam. 🙂
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Powerful work. Excellent.
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Thanks very much, Thomas.
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Time this is engaging prose that took me into the scene. You write excellent accounts and I for one am a big fan of your writing here. Truly hauntingly powerful. Starts off like an ordinary day and then full of surprises.
John
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there is an Alice in Wonderland quote that says “well behaved women rarely make history” great write 💕