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Read MoreCan we all agree to disagree on what the world thinks of you and meStop being silent on the inside while burning on the outside for the whole world to see Anger arises from weak mindsEye-opening deaths provoke hate crimesDo...
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Thank you Crimsin ❤️ I wrote most of this piece years ago and it saddens me that nothing has changed. If anything, it has gotten worse. I really appreciate your kind words.
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The opening line= “Can we agree to disagree” I gave you head nod on that. This is so beautiful.
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Thank you Fia! It means a lot coming from you ❤️
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Thank you so much 💕
I hope to keep expressing myself through this medium for a long time. And I’ll never forget who to thank for it 😉 -
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You’re writing some very strong pieces Lady that are truly depicting that status of our current world. Please continue pushing your powerful words Lady
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Thank you for commenting on this! I hope to continue this for a long time to come.
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent write, you’re a gifted lyricist my friend. Love the choice of Reggae to paint the background for your amazing words my friend. Such a truthful message about the state of the world. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damian! Can you believe I spent hours fitting these lyrics to punk rock??
And then my sister was listening to a reggae song on her phone and that changed my mind instantly. I personally love the way it sounds as it is now.Thank you for your kind words Damian. I won’t forget your support.
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It happens. I’m sure the words would have worked with punk. But I think you made the right choice. I’m a fan. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Another strong piece, my friend. I am so glad Her introduced us. I listen to you often (I even read the words! — and they are alway truthful and necessary).
I am so glad your sister wasn’t listening to a polka; this song would have a very different vibe. Brrr!
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Thank you FD! It means a lot.
Haha, Polka… No worries, I do have my limits!
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This is fantastic. Keep on, keeping on.
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Thank you Adagio!
I will. Music is life.
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Chris Twyford wrote a new post
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Read MoreOne can care, but takes two to share.The price of admission is always ...due, ya know?"The Price Of Admission..."I never hear youyou waitout of hearing...out of - having....And the tears- so pale, quiet, and frail,and my fingertips just traceso...
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You failed….. just as you asked for.
Great write👍
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Chuckling here, so you see the error too… great eye. This was written during one sitting – stream of conscious – pretty much as shown.
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hello deares Chris it seems her sadness may sustain you or make you unhappy as she is just out of reach either way this is clever and beautifully written ❤️
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We chase our woman until she catches us… and she never turned and did.
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I like how you combine the pieces. and the line I never hear you crying got to me. Nice spill here
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Written in one sitting and very real… thank you Fia for the pause.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS and
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Senryu
HauntedA single tear drops
Haunted by her lost lover
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Halloween may be over, Fia
But, you’ve learned the trick of keeping the ghostly treat of love’s forever haunting passion vibrantly alive, and what better than a beautifully laid Senryu to share it all with us in such a sweet way … maybe, a lover’s spell will be cast, returning “him” to your warming, tear-filled heart and arms.
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hello dearest Drieks this is one of your best in my opinion the climate out there is daunting… it worries me everyday I’m too old to change things in the eighties when I was young it was all about the money I don’t know if things have changed great write ❤️