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Read MoreShe carried his cards and letters,bundled with a rubber band,in her yellow raincoat. He stood on the motel roof,watching the freeway paint the night,headlights begging the question,Will I ever get it right? She mumbles from below.Depends if you take the right...
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Thank you.
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A trip into your mind, reveals how damaged we are as no one is set free. Unfiltered brilliance in your poetry & how you cut through the grit with your ideas. Great!
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I appreciate it.
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What I love about this is the double reflection. The reflection of the writer and the reflection of lights on the freeway. They blend beautifully into something very deep and human
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Thank you so much Willow.
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I think this is probably my most favouwritest of your little masterpieces to date Thomas .. actually, I’m pretty sure its write up there near the summit .. Neville
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Thank you, my friend.
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Read MoreRestless nights miles from sleepWitnessing the light fading fastWithout reward the price is steepCan’t outrun this troubled past Once crippled with silent ragePinned beneath a heavy stoneBattered heart in a dusty cageDesperate days spent all alone Hateful acts forged in painA...
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Fantastic, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This is a dark piece, but it is really good. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know it’s kinda dark, it came out of nowhere. lol. I’m in a good mood still. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Excellent piece.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well look at you being all dark after Christmas:)
Each section had its own dark point of view.
I really enjoyed the stanza about evil hiding in the mundane
It reminds me of the saying in the Bible. Idle hands are the devils workshop.Great piece amigo!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Also my favorite stanza as well. I was kinda going for the idle hands vibe. Wasn’t meaning to be dark at all, this write came out of nowhere. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian very darkly powerful ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic piece of dark poetry my friend. Wonderfully executed.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It certainly spawned out of nowhere. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Heavy hitting vibe, bro This moves the mind down some chambers
Much respect
Naaj
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes you gotta just roll with the punches. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A bittersweet piece, so beautiful and sad! I am glad that you reassured us that you are doing well , dear Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well I didn’t want anyone worrying about me, and I was happy while I wrote it. It’s kinda like a rain storm while the sun is still shining kinda vibe going on here. So bittersweet fits it perfectly. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This reads like a slow descent through psychological aftermath—the kind that doesn’t announce itself loudly but corrodes over time. The imagery stays grounded while the emotion escalates, especially the idea of evil hiding in the mundane. Quiet, heavy, and effective.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You got all that out of this write? lol. I’m just joshing you. Seriously though, your commentary really means a lot to me as well as your continued support my friend. You’re a gifted writer and I’m a fan of yours as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I can see why others see this is dark, but I read it more as a reflective piece on darker moments. Like sitting under moonlight and remembering full darkness of troubled days…having just enjoyed the warmth of a fire and full spirit. There are definitely elements that lean into darker aspects, but if we’re not peering into those corners, are we really paying attention, or are we just living in denial? To be all sunshine and daisies in the current environment is pure folly. I don’t see dark, I see the shadows that follow us wherever we go. The hope that we still find light. Follow that muse where it takes you, my friend. It never leads you astray
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I always enjoy your commentary, this one is reflective in a sense. Darkness does hide in those corners always lurking in shadow and watching our every move. To believe it doesn’t exist is denial I agree 100% Appreciate you.
Damian
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this is extraordinarily noir if you don’t mind me saying .. just saying .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I don’t mind you saying at all, that’s cool with me. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreLioness of the Desert Julian stretched, the clatter of china against ceramic a small rebellion in the hushed breakfast room of their Marrakesh riad. Outside, the morning light, already fierce, began its daily assault on the city’s ochre walls....
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I like the way you story tell. You take everything into consideration when building the tale. Nicely done
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Thank you so much Fia. Much appreciate you reading and your most kind words on my story, my friend. Most grateful.
John
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Read MoreI received word Rudolph was fucked up, and Santa wouldn't be making it outThe fucking weather was to fucked up, but never trust word of mouthI Is Me is fucking schemy all he does is schemeThere's visions of jacking...
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Pussy for presents. One of the greatest gifts given to dick.
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Hahaha, you’re a wildman dude. We was twisted when we wrote this piece, Thanks
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian