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Read MoreDaisy & The Rock War It wasn't a race thing. Some kidsjust hate other kids. There were 4blond haired blue eyed kids and6 mixed race kids...and lots of rocks. But first, 7 year old Daisy had coercedlittle 6 yr old Joey...
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Thanks Fia.
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Guys have been getting hurt for centuries over women in some way or another. :/
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Paula this is a masterfully written poem. it had me riveted to read what happened next. Suspenseful with lots of surprises. You really engage the reader. Am very impressed.
John
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Love is out there. You just need to find it. Lately though love has been held hostage by malicious entities. Great write.
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This is why you should stay.
Tears aren’t just for yourself.
🌻
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I could feel the emotions in this confessional strongly. You really have the gift of self expression. You are a gifted writer whom I am honored to read here.
John
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I hope you stay. You are an important part of our community.
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I think you’re good which is why I kept commenting. Good luck either way.
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Never give up Lady
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And then what will you do?
Writing is what you do and your very good at it.Sometimes, we all get tired of it.Then, out of nowhere,something enters our mucked up minds that just has to be passed on.
If you didn’t write would you even exist?
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Read MoreENTER MY DREAM We'll share a pillow and my Indianblanket. Turn out the lights. Don't be afraid...I'll keep you safe. Close youreyes and let's do some safe dreaming. I like to float on the sidewalks in mydreams. I can't quite fly,...
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Fun read. I liked the cotton candy reference
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I would love to fly a kite and climb into a tree house.
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Pleasant. Great write.
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Read MoreLADIES ROOM CONQUEST You are crying...I've been there and back......lean on me! It's ok...you don't have togo back out there! My name is Paula.Nice to meet you!You have a pretty smile. Yes you do!I have no reason to lie.You're shaking. Come here!I will comfort...
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Cotton Candy is called Fairy Floss in Australia.
“She tastes like fairy floss”
Fact or fiction, you’re writing is always terrific and always grammatically correct.🌻
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Thanks. I think I need to find more meaning in my life. I post everyday and have put together 2 books that no one has read. It’s starting to seem pointless. I may take a break soon or just give up.
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Hoi hoi
Love this one.I went to a lezzie bar (one of the first in Amsterdam) with a lady friend of mine. It wasn’t really common for a guy to be there and my bum was lovingly slapped by some of the women on their way to the loo.
That’s why I know that there is always something going on in the loo.
My idea for you would be to drink a little less and love a little more. Love as in making love.
And never give up trying for happiness and very good writes….But hey, it’s only me. I read your writes no matter what.
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Keep on write and keep on tasting the cotton candy. Don’t give up.
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You are super talented. Don’t leave!
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Omg that little..shit. She lived and he dies and the whole family destroyed because of a kiss that was never going to happen. Wickedly good story